Reviews for Red Devil
DreamQuill chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
That was totes funny. Soccerward is an ass, but I'm used to douchey Edwards so I like that. Hopefully B will hold to her principles and not let him worm his way into her pants yet. I'm really curious about Jacob. I know nothing about soccer so thanks, Chelle, for making this understandable for me. You both write well together. J seems to write well with everyone. I'm jealous. I want someone to colab with me but no one's offered *pity*.

My favorite line was the one Bella said about her pussy being paradise and Edward never getting to go there. The tat was also funny. I don't hate Victoria. She just seems desperate and sad. I've heard the term WAG on the BBC and had no clue what it meant. I also hear Chav a lot. Clear that up for me if you have time.

Right now I don't trust anyone. I can't wait to see EPOV of what happened in that office. I also want to know where she is taking him. Well looks like I've rambled though another review so update and put me out of my misery. Oh and give Soccerward a kick in the nuts for that line about women. We are versatile.
cutechick24272 chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
i LOVE this. i love all the characters the only thing is that it would be nice to be told what Bella is doing as I am slightly clueless. I ADORE the window scene were Bella flirts with Edward then walks off. FABULOUS
dreampills chapter 3 . 5/14/2010
i LOL really hard about that tat - location and all. hehe
NikkiBXD chapter 3 . 5/14/2010
All I have to say for this chapter is...hahahahahahaha...It was freaking awesome! I loved it :D

He answered the the police...naked! LMAO

He wears raybans. *Drools*

"Well, paradise is my pussy, and with a bad boy such as yourself, you won't every get there." OMFG Bella is amazaing! :D

"Trust me when I say I'm the one dishing out the spanks in the bedroom, Swan," Spanking! *Drools.*

Awesome Chapter :)

I have you on alert now! So I won't miss anything! :D

NikkiBXD chapter 2 . 5/14/2010
Hey :)

Me again!

Awesome fist chapter :)

NikkiBXD chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Hey :)

Awesome Prologue :D

robwardlover chapter 2 . 5/13/2010
eeeks. i love this. i love when fics are english. it just makes me happy i have no reason why. im from down south. Arsenal allll the way :D
Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 2 . 5/12/2010
As soccer is my all-time fave team sport (cuz there's just nothing sexier than knowing that a man can go non-stop for 45 minutes, you hear what I'm sayin?), I am TOTALLY on board with this-here fic. Soccerward - UNF! Yes and please.

Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
You have this marked as humor/romance. But it sounds like Bella has been taken by some kind of revenge-crazed psycho hosebeast. That doesn't sound very humorous. Just sayin.

But I'm'a give it a chance, cuz I lurve chartwilightmom's stuff...

dreampills chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
getting it on with a client is not good..hope bella's learned her lesson..or not. ;) maybe we should hope that edward's changes his ways instead.
dreampills chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
great start to a story. i am always a sucker for a great prologue!
DreamQuill chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
I'm going to review while I'm still a little sober. So fucking awesome guys! Thanks for the shoutout. My nips are hard for you two. Anyways, Bella has been hurt so I don't think she's going to fall for Soccerward's shit easily. I look forward to fireworks. I know nothing about UK soccer so this should be fun. Thanks for clearing up stuff at the end. I already hate Jacob and Charlie, but love Carlisle and Caius. I joined the blogsy too. We! Update soon or I will take out my paddle.
jarkin33 chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
I love it! Can't wait to get a hard-ass bella for once!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

xo bb
ju007 chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
love love the update girls!
Can't wait to watch this story unfold!
ju007 chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
love it!
Can't wait to see this story develop! I know it's going to be amazing!
I can't wait for an update!
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