|Reviews for Hidden Warrior|
| shadowchild613 chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
You could definately make something out of this. A kick-ass Yachiru is exactly what the Net needs! No wonder everybody just lets her do whatever she wants...
| Geiru chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Luv it, man... I've always dreamed Yachiru will actually be like that...
Though it'd be more interesting, in my opinion, if she gets really bad-assed when she's totally pissed... Cursing may be cute to hear from her, too...
Hope I made sense... ,
| Adele365 chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Cute. Very cute. It could be incorporated into a story if you can think of one. Maybe an AU where she cuts in on either Ichigo/Kenpachi, Nnoitra/Kenpachi, or even Yammi/Kenpachi. Or maybe Byakuya gets pissed off enough to fight her. That'd be funny... Ah well, whatever you like. BTW I finally uploaded the story Kitt and I wrote ages ago. It should show up soon. get to it thru my author page.
| xx SecretlyInsane xx chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
You are most definitely not "polluting the internet" as you put it, this was the greatest little one shot! It was cute and gory at the same time, I loved it! (It would be awesome if this actually happened in the anime.)You should think about writing more, maybe elaborating on this one-shot and creating an actual story.
(P.S.- I love the last paragraph, I never pictured Yachiru as being so vicious and blood-thirsty!)