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papasean chapter 1 . 1/30
I always hated my mother
My dad hated her too.
Just the other day we bonded over our hatred
Unlike her who loved us both
She always has and says she always will
Today that changes
After lunch we will ambush her
Killing all of her hope to raise me well
I cant wait...
Do I really want to do this?
Why not?
How could I do it without crying.
Of course she wouldn't be very happy
She would die and I would lose her forever
Father won't be upset
Our hatred is unanimous
Unless he secretly doesn't want her to die
Ready? I ask myself?
Each day i contemplate this situation
After a few minutes I usually break into tears
Crying my eyes out I wait for tomorrow
He hears me.
Dad asks me whats wrong
A whimper comes out of my mouth as I tell him it was a nightmare
You probably wont believe me
I can't seem to get anybody to
Great pain washes over me just thinking about it
Right as I write this
On my thoughts I cant stop thinking about it.
When I was betrayed
Sometimes I think of how my dad betrayed me
Offering release but japeing me and killing me instead
My eyes well up with tears.
Each person is special in his/her own way
My way is that i'm dead
Or you could say im in a better place
Resting on the clouds
Each day I grow some more
~Caillou1
Lw117149 chapter 1 . 8/4/2017
Lol nice
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
iron man would never beat hulk
Elena chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
XD Freaking loved this!
wtf chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
what the f*ck
Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
um.. ok. Your name is accurate. Scraps. This seems like a scrap of an actually story.
atrfla chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Hulk write this review! You read!
Hulk like this story! You update!
Hulk be nice! Hulk say please!
PLEASE!
WalterP chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Enjoyed this. Thank you.
Trubie74 chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
That was cool, just wish there was more.
codpro44 chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
thats it you need more at least 500 words
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
hulk pass out! 3
i hope nobody kissed him while he was a sleep...
ThomE.Gemcity-06 chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
:) funny
NIE chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Wow... Nice.
The Jackal chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
ROFL I love you for your Iron Man stories!
Graybear32 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
How corny can ya get? :-P
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