Reviews for What to Expect When Emma is Expecting
batzmaru347 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
I really enjoyed this story. It was really cute. I really liked the teasing between the two Knightley brothers.

Only one minor typo.

"Still holding the carving knife, he [Mr. Woodhouse] waived it about as he finally managed to exclaim..."

It should be "waved" not "waived".
Fanmlz chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Adorable! You do a wonderful job of keeping everyone in character.
indianpipe chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Really well done. I love Mr. Woodhouse's reaction and how Emma nonchalantly takes the knife away.
ChocolateIsMyDrug chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
Oh, this was just perfect! So many things to adore: I really loved the idea that Emma and Mr Knightley have been so close for so many years that it does feel like they've been married forever, and that they're already sort of like creepers which have grown around and about each other, a state most married couples need some years to reach. Plus I loved the little inclusion of 'Hm, yes' - I just love the way JLM 'Hm's.

I loved Mr Woodhouse's consternation about Mr Knightley's 'acting' so soon, and the good-natured banter between the Knightley brothers about it. I laughed out loud more than once.

This whole story was adorable - really hope you write more Emma fic!
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