Reviews for Five kino files Eli erased that no one knew about
Yoyi-Yi chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
I have 5 more to you if you want them:

1. Chloe painting a Hello Kitty face in Young's undershirt as a joke. Young finds it. He smiles and uses it. xD

2. Camile attempting to solve one of Rush mathematics algorithms.

3. Greer imitating Son Goku from Dragon Ball.

4. Eli singing a song from some videogame.

5. Becker crying from happiness for having more fresh food.
Nicky Reid chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
good job
JolinarJackson chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
You have a way of describing things ... I love it. I actually laughed out loud when I read this:

"But apparently the kino moved and instead it showed just him wobbling unsteadily and generally looking about as flexible as a pizza box."

Once again a wonderful little fanfiction. They make my day every single time when I sit at work trying to not work but look as if I am.
samcarter1022 chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
these are great, awesome little snipettes of life on Destiny.
ziparumpazoo chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Really liked this, especially the last two - Eli's a smart guy, but he sure has a sharp learning curve when it comes to people. You've captured those moments perfectly.
T-man626 chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Very, very well done (and in the case of number 5, very very disturbing). Any chance of more?
JeannieWood chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
I liked it. Disturbing little parts of peoples lives, behind closed doors. And a little humor there on Eli's part.