|Reviews for Candy Girl|
| Glitterthorn chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
OHMYGAWD IT'S ADORABLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEE!
| Monty Bojangles chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
This is interesting :)
I'm just a little curious about a few things in your fic.
For example, the use of 'awesomest'. I do appreciate putting in non standard dictionary-found words for the effect of giving the character a non standard personality, but the grammar nazi in me isn't so keen.
Also, what really caught my attention was both Sai and Kiba's personality change.
I just can't believe Sai is capable of acting so flirty and clingy like that when he is incapable of comprehending emotion in the series.
This isn't bad, but I'd be happier reading this if this was exactly what I was expecting from the story with an OOC fun warning, or (without any offence intended) a crack! warning.
You have a nice writing style, and clearly your grammar is basically excellent. I don't see the their theyre there rookie mistakes that make me claw my eyes out. :)