|Reviews for Discovery|
| lateVMlover chapter 50 . 3/5
This is the first Bones/BTVS crossover I've really read, and I so enjoyed it. I really loved your characterization and the way you added to the story we already knew.
| THACA221B chapter 16 . 2/11
I see what you did there in Chapter 16. "She looked happy, going through the motions of making pancakes." Well, I'll probably just review again, Once More With Feeling.
| GNatGirl13 chapter 32 . 1/8
Hi! I am having a lot of fun reading this! One of these days I will actually get around to watching BONES and all these crossovers will make even more sense (I have read one of the books).
However, I noticed a couple canonical inconsistencies (or something) as I was reading. Nothing that really effects the story, more just FYI if you ever go back and do any edits.
The first is Willow's age. I have no idea when her birthday is 'supposed to' be either on the calendar or in relation to Buffy's and, therefore, even less idea how old she is 'supposed to' be. You do need to be consistent though. At the beginning of the story, you have Willow as being 17. Having just turned 17 in time to search for her real parents. Then later you mention her as being the youngest at 16. Like I said, I neither know nor care that much, just a matter of consistency.
The second one is a matter of dates. First, Thanksgiving is always a Thursday. Most schools in the US that I know of have off Thursday and Friday, sometimes Wednesday and the following Monday. The days were just a little confusing around Boothe's visit to Sunnydale. Around that same time, you made mention of Willow's Christmas vacation. At first, you said she finished the 23 (two days before Christmas) and came back sometime mid-January. (Pretty typical in my experience although a bit long for high school) Now, however, I believe she arrived the week before Christmas? Just want to check that.
The last one is Oz. In canon, Oz does not really join the group until Buffy's 17th birthday, which I believe will be 'next month' in your story. I don't care when he 'joins', I had actually wondered where he was at one point. The problem is that he 'suddenly' appeared in the email at the beginning of this chapter without ANY prior mention in the story.
Again, I am really liking this story and none of these 'notes' have any real effect on the story as a whole, just things I noticed that it is good to be aware of in this story and future ones! : )
| ameliemallette1 chapter 50 . 12/28/2015
Jai beaucoup aimé. Merci.
| Rune Tobor chapter 50 . 12/20/2015
A slow but steady story.
Tara is never mentioned, I would have had Buffy meet her and befriend her.
I'll pretend that happened and that she was never shot by Warren.
| GeorgeTobor chapter 17 . 12/16/2015
Don't worry about it too much.
Technically only Joss and crew CAN write In Character.
Others may try, might even get close, but also can never truly do it.
Just write Willow as very smart, Xander as funny and courageous, etc and you'll be fine.
| GeorgeTobor chapter 15 . 12/16/2015
Willow would have known what an entomologist was.
I knew when I was 16.
| Noooo Aime chapter 50 . 9/17/2015
Hoooo that was great !
I love this story !
Thank you !
Une fan ;)
| Mitsuki Shigamatsu chapter 27 . 5/15/2015
Sounds like PTSD... Poor Zach.
| stephcullen2000 chapter 50 . 4/10/2015
I love it, was totally shipping Zach/Willow and therefore cutest ending ever xxx
| Yabbit chapter 13 . 12/29/2014
Hodgins last comment made me laugh out loud. Perfectly in character there.
| Beautiful-Tyrant77 chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
It is not Warped your imagination is beautiful.
| Beautiful-Tyrant77 chapter 3 . 7/27/2014
you know I actually figured she'd be bones daughter but her being Booth's daughter is an really nice and awesome. Though now that I think about Booth might not know about Willow.
| Beautiful-Tyrant77 chapter 2 . 7/27/2014
This sounds amazing so far. It's got me really happy.
| Talon5Krrde chapter 50 . 11/17/2013
Thank you for the story!