Reviews for Fever
RoseLynn14267 chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
that was so beautiful! i was almost crying at the end! poor naruto! that was really really well written!
Housenka chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
speechless-that was just amazing!
Kitty Seeboo chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
That was very well written. I really enjoyed it. Good job.
sylver rain chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
gahh that was well written. I'm still uncomfy with all the lemon but sigh you got their characters down so well.. just everything they say and do with each other. Nice work..
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
Nice story!
SerialAuthor chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
This was beautiful, and Sasuke has dangerous reflexes.
Fire x Ice chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
That was amazing and I loved every second of it. :)
RaspberrySakura chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
Hey, I read your story and I liked it ;) thank you for writing it!
HollyEmpire00 chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
OMGGGGGGGG!

Please do another chapter, i LUUUUUUVVVVSS the concept, and i think my favourite line was;

"Reflex"

When Sasuke nearly cuts him.

IT'S GREAT!
eternal-butterfly chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
i loved this, sad and sweet, be oh so good. x x
CreepyThings chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
This was awesome. I loved it! Your a great writer, im look forward to reading more of you stories! *U*
saria14 chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
So sweet, so sad, great story : 3
Lingo10 chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
wow a little sad at the end, it was very good
FlyingTackle chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Good, confusing, pretty OOC, especially the end, but...
You write very well. And I did enjoy it; I'd read it again.
Alley-Oop chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
As expected, this was amazing. Everything was just... spot on. The emotions in the characters were wonderful.

Oh, and I loved Sasuke's reflexive action, when he drew his katana toward the end. Lovely.
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