Reviews for First Impression
Aqua Burst 07 chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Aww this is so cute. I can't wait until the next book comes out! This makes me want to read it more!
Technomad chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
This is pretty good. I think Sabetha's IC, from the little we've seen of her in the official excerpt. Roll on _Republic of Thieves_...I want to meet her.
CrimsonCobwebs chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Aw Locke was cute in this chapter! This is exactly how I imagine Sabetha to be, and judging by the official excerpt I think she's rather IC, actually! My favourite line, and one I can imagine would fit nicely into the book, is 'what's that on my chair?' Ha! Genius.

Would it be at all possible to post this on my fansite to the GB sequence ()? You'd be credited!
twilightwrites chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
It's very impressive how you've managed to use such a small amount of information to reproduce a character. I've NEVER been able to do that! And I really like how you've made Sabetha's first impression of Locke, how she sees him as annoying novice since she has yet to discover his talents, as well as her feelings of distrust for him. Keep writing!