I came across this story randomly on someone else's list of favs. I love your quirky characters and the way the dialogue flows. I am surprised it doesn't have more reviews, but I guess that's because it never finished...Too bad, I bet it would have been great.

She's crazier than a shit house rat!

Really loving this story. Where's the rest?

O.o.

nice!

oh! nicely done!

I love it. All the animals, the setting, the characters, the story...I'm adoring this story. Jasper will not be happy when he finds out about James. Dying to know what the full story is there. And maybe more of Edward's if there is more. Can't wait. Keep Going!

Interesting feel to your first chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing where your fic goes.

*sigh*

I love you. I'm leaving you this suck ass review as proof of my undying affection.

Great chemistry between these two and I love caveman protective Edward. Now I need more suspense and drama. Thank God you're already wrapping up chapter 12, right? Right!

Uh-oh. I'm getting my conflict soon? Remind me never to glance innocently at your boyfriend. By the way, I forgot to commend you on the Buffy reference. Possessed sex is the BEST;)

Glad to see an update! So very hot (last few paragraphs)! Not the James yuckiness of course.

Now you're just messing with me. Edward has no baggage, they're so happy together, good in bed, and he likes cats. Sweet;) Right?

Great, believable lemon with all the moving, adjusting and talking. Things are more perfect - you're going to shit on that, aren't you?

So Bella won't swallow and she won't do it in a shower. Bella really needs to get out of her comfort zone a little. Great chapter - moving things forward at a nice, realistic pace. Things are too perfect, though. I'm nervous.

I can't describe it, but your writing feels so personal that I'm always startled when you refer to the character as Bella. Who's Bella?