Reviews for Of Moons and Cinders I
BlackCat0013 chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
Darn this story was really good!
decidedlyindecisive chapter 2 . 5/1/2010
Wow, that *was* a fats update.
I like the way things are going. Update.
Rubyblaze chapter 2 . 5/1/2010
Glad too.

Flowerpetal: Stubborn but kind at times only mates with Cloudnose because her father wanted her to be mates with his friends kit.
Cloudnose: Kind guy but was *cough* stuck *cough* with Flowerpetal, so that weakens his kindess.

Oh. About MoonXCinder- Usually a warrior's kit is given to a senior warrior so that is where I got that idea BUT then again age dosent stop love! :)
Keep the story up! I like it :)
Rubyblze chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
You want an OC? I got two ThunderClaners for you
Name: Flowerpetal
Gender: She-cat
Rank: warrior
Pelt: Black-and-white
Eyes: amber
Mate: Cloudnose

Name: Cloudnose
Gender: Tom
Rank: warrior
Eyes: Gray
Mate: Flowerpetal
By the way: I like the story so far! I dont think CinderXMoon will work because Moonshard is WAY older than her.
decidedlyindecisive chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Cool, I guess. Update!