Reviews for Camp Legends: Chaos |
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![]() ![]() ![]() When's the epic sora skyfaller gonna pwn :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good! Keep it up! By the way, IF you're intrested, I sent you a pm about an OC, because I saw the roster wasn't full. If you would like, I can give them to you through PM. Anyways, I love how all of the characters seem to already know each other. It adds more believability to the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job with this chapter, I can't wait for the next one! I hope my oc is in the next one! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job with this chapter, I can't wait for the next one! I hope my oc is in the next one! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel all guilty for not reviewing. I didn't even realized you updated. PLEASEDON'THATEME! QQ Ok, enough of my retarded dramatics. This story is just more interesting than it was before. And there's a humor factor, which makes it more enjoyable. I hope you update soon. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Hope I can joy the fun, hope you like her) here is my OC: Name: Iris Rose Nicknames: Angel Rose, Demon Heart, and Twilight Rose Gender: Female Birthday: October 31 Age: 11 Hometown: Hearthome City, Sinnoh Personality/History: maybe a angel but acts like the devil, but can be a tomboy. She is a ballet dancer like the black and white swans and she sings her heart/soul out./ she has no memory of her past before the age of 6, she walk around for weeks with no one around her with only her purple stone necklace around her neck as a piece of her past. Until Nurse Joy found her on the streets one day and took her in as her own, that was the first time she was ever loved, and the first time she met Rose as a Ralts, took ballet and singing lessons. Appearance- Hair and Eyes: long wavy red hair and sapphire blue eyes ~Everyday: down and long ~Sleeping: in two pink tails ~Swimming: and a pony tail Accessories: a white hat and a purple stone necklace Clothing: ~Everyday: white shirt with three black roses and long black sleeves, black and white plated skirt, black leggins, black boots, black and white fingerless gloves ~Sleeping: a white nightgown, with mini black roses all over ~Swimming: a white two piece with three black roses Guardian: Heatran Pokemon on hand: ~Romeo a male Umberon: stubborn, and yet he is calm when Juliet or Twilight is around and will do anything to protect them and his mistress ~Juliet a female Espeon: calm, at peace when her mistress sings, she dances with her as she dances and looks after Twilight and her mistress ~Rose a female Karlia: main pokemon and first friend, she is calm, graceful, and at peace, she dances ballet with her mistress and will left her into the air. ~Heat a male Heatran: her guardian pokemon she met him when she walked out of her home and into spark mountain. Stubborn and yet calm with his trainer ~Tails a female Ninetails: calm and at peace, she loves her mistress singing and being with the little ones ~Twilight a female Eevee: Romeo and Juliet's child and the youngest one of the team, she is playful and calm and she is also stubborn. She really loves to be with her parents and her mistress. Family: no family that she knows of Crush: she doesn't have a crush yet Relationships: she is looking for someone Battle Cry: 'Time for me to show the power of Twilight!' 'let's dance you demon!' |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dont even remember what I all put for my oc / what is this I dont even... hehe good chapter! I really wished I remembered my OC haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been awhile, huh? Too long, but its good to see you haven't forgotten the story. Introduced a lot of people, huh? Nice update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yea, I didn't really understand. I just realized something I didn't put in my pm. She's the guardian of Victini and Palkia. Sounds like a great story. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like a great story. I'll pm you my oc, but I hope you update soon. Sorry if I'm to late. |
![]() ![]() I am Abigail im thirteen and if you want i will live in green city in the rainbow region I have black hair with red streaks and yellow streaks my parents died eight years ago and though my favorite pokemon is Giratina i can take genesect. For ya, my swimsuit is black and grey I adore pokemon and would appreciate if I can be in your story I am around 5.7 I think you want a description of the city so green city is off the coast of yellow town and bright green in color. My eyes this is really actully true are grey with a hint of red and yellow. I wear a shirt with Giratina on it and black leggings with a red skirt, I would appreciate if I could have a gallade a Poocheyena a empoleon a genesect and victini and Palkia? He is Giratinas brother so I adore him that'd be why I have illusions of pokemon sometimes oh yeah is Arceus taken it has a weird voice I like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome starting Chapter! Thanks for including Max! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good luck with the story! This certainly looks like a lot of fun! I also LOVE Christmas' name X) her personality is quite colourful and I can't wait to read more about her. Shall send me OC and hope for the best~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there, am I too late to submit an OC? ...it's ok if I am but it doesn't hurt to try, right? I Have an OC that you could use if you want to. Name: Roxanne Maes Nicknames(s):Roxy (what she goes by) and emo-chan(only when teased) Gender: Female Birthday: October, 3rd Age: 11 Hometown: Violet town, Kanto (nothing special) Guardian: Deoxys (if still available)Roxy had been with the Deoxys since she was young and treats him more like a brother then a pokemon. Knowing that she get's a bit in over her head, he has become rather protective and possesive of her to prevent any harm to her, but he's also shy so prefers to remain hidden if possible. Personallity: To call Roxy a tomboy would be an understatement. She goes out and plays in the mud, gets into fights, spends all her free time and money on comic books, video games and bubble gum, not to mention she has some crude habits that she shamelessly does in public (biting nails, picking teeth, cleaning ears with her pinky). Despite all that, she would never be mistaken as a boy because she does look like a girl. (Infact she's more likely to be mistaken as a wild pokemon)despite all these things, she's extremely polite depending on the person (if she doesn't like the person she's rather snarky), never goes back on her word, the most loyal friend in the world (like a puppy)and has some just plain quirky habbits that make her down right adorable! One last thing is that she hates the steriotype that all tomboys are sporty because she has to be the biggist clutz in the whole world! History: Roxy grew up closer to pokemon then her family, perticularly the darker and scarrier kind. While her older brother Luca and her twin sister Ruby caught and trained pokemon such as Flaafy, pikachu, pachirisu and marill, Roxy was out in the back yard in hand-to-hand combat with an Ursaring while her parents and own pokemon flipped. "There's something wrong with that child..." was something her parents would say atleast once a day. Though, there were somethings to make them proud as she had gained both her mother's singing voice and father's artistic hand and view on the world...but for the most part it was"Why cant you be more like your sister?" Appearence: Hair: she has cherry red hair that just reaches past her shoulders with the tips and area that should be her bangs dyed black. Eyes: mossy green with a rim of gold around her pupils and naturaly long eye lashes. Everyday hairstyle~ since she's so lazy, she just leaves it down. Sleeping hairstyle~ put up in a low ponytail. Swimming hairstyle~ either in a loose bun or two low pig tails. Accesories: typically likes to wear miss matched arm warmers, fingerless gloves and cooky caps or her favorite goggles but not all the time... (She'd be the person strutting around the mall shamelessly in a sonic the hedgehog hat) Clothing: Everyday- a black tee shirt with a bloody rose, faded pattern on it, breaching her left side, a blood red, long sleeve undershirt and bleach splattered indigo jeans that reach her knees. Unmatching socks and just simple black converse. Sleeping-only loose teeshirts (Either her large gray one that says "beauty sleep, get some." or one that has to do with a videogame or anime) and her underwear. Swimming-A simple black bakini...doesn't need any accesories or sandals! Pokemon on hand: Argon, a male Houndoom. ~assentially like the team dad. He's the only responcible one in the group and Roxy's had him for the longest. He's not very trusting and once you cross him theres almost nothing you can do to regain his trust. Nova, a female Umbreon. ~She's the shy and quiet type who sticks to her trainer like glue, almost never in her pokeball. Was originally aneevee that she met at (wondering what the heck an eevee was doing there in the first place) only eats sour foods. Orion, a male sableye. ~Orion is the snarky teaser of the group who tries to act tough but on the inside he's a real softie! He can't stay mad at anyone for long and is quite selfish, but every now and then he shares. Boron, a male Banette. ~ Though Boron's pretty much the kindest pokemon on the team and completely open, everyone seems to fear him. Though everyone but his master seem to avoid him, he still continues to try to make friends. Aria, a femmale Absol. ~Elegant and mysterious in appearence, the disaster pokemon builds her ego off of that, and though it's true most of the time, sometimes she can break down and become a total coward...though she's mostly graceful, mysterious and motherly to Roxy. Lythium, a deoxys. ~As said before, Lythium is a rather shy pokemon and prefers not to be seen, but sometimes he has to for the sake of Roxy (he and Argon take turns babysitting her) Like most living beings, he doesn't like change and is a typically peacable creature. Family: Immediate~ Sarah Maes- mother, retired pokemon breeder Austin Maes- father, pokemon artest. Luca Maes-older brother, took over the family breeding buisness Ruby Maes- twin sister (she dyed her hair blonde though) pokemon coordinator Crush: She's never had any interest in anyone but you can give her a crush or have someone crush on her if you feel like it. Relationship(s):typically gets along with most people, unless they're stuck up or flirty, then she get's realy snarky with them! She also get's mad when people call her emo-chan because of how she dresses and the pokemon she has even though she's an optimistic bundle of sinshiney energy. it seems as if she's un-able to feel the emotion of love towards anyone more then loving them like a sibling (one of the guardians might want to change that or something...anyways, has a harder time getting along with the guardians on Palkia, Dialga and Mew Two. Battle Cry: "Have fun *insert name here, try not to kill anyone!" |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! I thought this fic was dead! But I guess you proved me wrong! o.o I think I get it... well I have a foreshadowing THEORY if that counts.. :p. Like...the world is going to end X.e okay, I'm stumped... But if it involves greek- then the bad guys has to be mystical/otherworldly, right? :P lol, man... Zekrom's in here too? DX -sighs- Oh well, and ya still need more Oc's as well! |