Reviews for Captain America Noir
vv360 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
It's an interesting premise you've come up with in this fic, particularly due to the fact that the Super-soldier treatment or the Captain America identity has as of yet gone unmentioned, so I'm piqued as to how and when exactly Steve gets into his iconic mold, if he does so at all.

The dialogue is spot on, but I would rather that you try to be a little more descriptive with things, be colorful about the setting, especially since this is supposed to be a noir story, I wanted to feel more of the atmosphere, the grit and mystery of the genre.
Danrilor chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
This is a promising start. I look forward to more chapters like this to review, but I was curious how Steve managed to serve in the war without Project: Rebirth. Perhaps that can be covered in later chapters. I would like to see a noir interpretation of Steve. You write very well and I will probably look into your other stories.