Reviews for The Last Breath
Dawn63 chapter 30 . 4/15
Loved reading your story. Definitely one of my favorites. I'm hoping Jasper's not really dead and that somehow he will be able to make it out alive. Going to read The Long Way Home to find out. Your writing is so authentic for the time period. Great job!
sersmom chapter 2 . 1/30
I’ve read this before but this time I went ahead and read Lavender Mornings. I love the way you have taken a “what if” direction for Miss Edi and her David.
Nlresda123 chapter 31 . 12/2/2018
Amazing story. Going straight to my favourites list. Wow. Your writing ability is fantastic
LAB1 chapter 31 . 5/13/2018
I've loved your story, but I still feel in my heart that Jasper is alive. Just like Bella and Edward were reported dead and they weren't, Jasper has been badly burned and scared, but he does come back to see his namesake! And of course Alice!
Ameliah Cullen chapter 2 . 9/8/2016
Wow ! Brilliant. I love looking into Edwards Mind and as I've said you have portrayed it perfectly!
Ameliah Cullen chapter 1 . 9/8/2016
I really love the way you speak from Edwards mind. Its just brilliant. I've only read the first chapter and I already want to know what's going to happen next! Keep up the Good work
magmom4 chapter 30 . 3/25/2016
I have read this for the second time. It is a great story. I was born in 1943 so you can see the interest. I do seem to remember there was more. Could you let6 me know if there is.
Lmx3108 chapter 30 . 1/10/2016
What a wonderful story this was. So well-written, well-researched, and just so enjoyable. Thank you!
jetteblack chapter 30 . 11/24/2015
oh gosh- ilove this story and Jaspers one, i read them in my early fanfic days before i started favouriting and i had to do the big search, so glad i had a second chance to reread, awesome :) thanks
Sunshine1220 chapter 30 . 11/6/2015
Loved, loved, loved this story. Can't wait to read your other tales!
PAT2024 chapter 31 . 9/29/2015
Waou !.. I loved this beautiful story. It's so well written. Thank you for so much emotions and historical details. You've done a great job. I really wonder why your story is not more reviewed, favoured... It's one of the best stories I ever read on this site. I'm so happy I found it. The love of Edward for Bella and Serena is so beautiful, the plot, the atmosphere, everything was there. I would have liked a few BPOVs may be... I cried so much during the last chapter... I am eager to read Jasper's story, right now, I hope he will find his Alice and have an HEA...
Thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 18 . 9/9/2015
I'm going to see the Queen Maey in Long beach with new eyes the next time I head down there. We usually go for the Scottish faire in the spring.
Rebadams7 chapter 17 . 9/9/2015
Brilliant to get things out in the open in the space between the heartbeats. It had to be done and the danger meant it also had to be dealt with now. It hurt them both but like an inoculation the pain will pass leaving them both stronger
Rebadams7 chapter 15 . 9/9/2015
Bella is the clever to Edward's concern. Together they cover the bases. No wonder Bella is such a trusted operative
Rebadams7 chapter 14 . 9/9/2015
I could not stop betwixt theses chapters. The dread and hope. The hope and anger. War makes the untenable, tenable, reasonable even. Betrayal is a companion in espionage, lurking, waiting to strike as you catch your breath, so you learn to hold it. No winder Brlla heard out against the ether
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