Reviews for The Last Breath
jetteblack chapter 30 . 11/24
oh gosh- ilove this story and Jaspers one, i read them in my early fanfic days before i started favouriting and i had to do the big search, so glad i had a second chance to reread, awesome :) thanks
Sunshine1220 chapter 30 . 11/6
Loved, loved, loved this story. Can't wait to read your other tales!
PAT2024 chapter 31 . 9/29
Waou !.. I loved this beautiful story. It's so well written. Thank you for so much emotions and historical details. You've done a great job. I really wonder why your story is not more reviewed, favoured... It's one of the best stories I ever read on this site. I'm so happy I found it. The love of Edward for Bella and Serena is so beautiful, the plot, the atmosphere, everything was there. I would have liked a few BPOVs may be... I cried so much during the last chapter... I am eager to read Jasper's story, right now, I hope he will find his Alice and have an HEA...
Thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 18 . 9/9
I'm going to see the Queen Maey in Long beach with new eyes the next time I head down there. We usually go for the Scottish faire in the spring.
Rebadams7 chapter 17 . 9/9
Brilliant to get things out in the open in the space between the heartbeats. It had to be done and the danger meant it also had to be dealt with now. It hurt them both but like an inoculation the pain will pass leaving them both stronger
Rebadams7 chapter 15 . 9/9
Bella is the clever to Edward's concern. Together they cover the bases. No wonder Bella is such a trusted operative
Rebadams7 chapter 14 . 9/9
I could not stop betwixt theses chapters. The dread and hope. The hope and anger. War makes the untenable, tenable, reasonable even. Betrayal is a companion in espionage, lurking, waiting to strike as you catch your breath, so you learn to hold it. No winder Brlla heard out against the ether
Rebadams7 chapter 11 . 9/8
Such a beautiful memory to share on the eve of such a painful episode. Brilliant
Rebadams7 chapter 10 . 9/8
Did you ever read The rest of the books? See the dramatization adaptation on Starz? Just curious. The loss of a child, unaccepted is a tragedy. Edward is very wise
Rebadams7 chapter 9 . 9/7
A.l sorts of odd smells and tastes from antibiotics. Who knew!
Rebadams7 chapter 5 . 9/7
Burns. Horrible pain and a creep towards death. A dire situation indeed
Rebadams7 chapter 4 . 9/7
Having you mention just4ALE brings a few tears to my eyes. What a brilliant light to loose in this world. What a wonderful Edward you've revealed
Rebadams7 chapter 3 . 9/7
The horoscope of war were already familiar to the young recruit
Rebadams7 chapter 2 . 9/7
The Silver Star is a rare award. Not often given to he living.
Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 9/7
Brilliant description of the realities of WWII medicine
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