Reviews for The Last Breath
Lmx3108 chapter 30 . 1/10
What a wonderful story this was. So well-written, well-researched, and just so enjoyable. Thank you!
jetteblack chapter 30 . 11/24/2015
oh gosh- ilove this story and Jaspers one, i read them in my early fanfic days before i started favouriting and i had to do the big search, so glad i had a second chance to reread, awesome :) thanks
Sunshine1220 chapter 30 . 11/6/2015
Loved, loved, loved this story. Can't wait to read your other tales!
PAT2024 chapter 31 . 9/29/2015
Waou !.. I loved this beautiful story. It's so well written. Thank you for so much emotions and historical details. You've done a great job. I really wonder why your story is not more reviewed, favoured... It's one of the best stories I ever read on this site. I'm so happy I found it. The love of Edward for Bella and Serena is so beautiful, the plot, the atmosphere, everything was there. I would have liked a few BPOVs may be... I cried so much during the last chapter... I am eager to read Jasper's story, right now, I hope he will find his Alice and have an HEA...
Thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 18 . 9/9/2015
I'm going to see the Queen Maey in Long beach with new eyes the next time I head down there. We usually go for the Scottish faire in the spring.
Reb
Rebadams7 chapter 17 . 9/9/2015
Brilliant to get things out in the open in the space between the heartbeats. It had to be done and the danger meant it also had to be dealt with now. It hurt them both but like an inoculation the pain will pass leaving them both stronger
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Rebadams7 chapter 15 . 9/9/2015
Bella is the clever to Edward's concern. Together they cover the bases. No wonder Bella is such a trusted operative
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Rebadams7 chapter 14 . 9/9/2015
I could not stop betwixt theses chapters. The dread and hope. The hope and anger. War makes the untenable, tenable, reasonable even. Betrayal is a companion in espionage, lurking, waiting to strike as you catch your breath, so you learn to hold it. No winder Brlla heard out against the ether
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Rebadams7 chapter 11 . 9/8/2015
Such a beautiful memory to share on the eve of such a painful episode. Brilliant
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Rebadams7 chapter 10 . 9/8/2015
Did you ever read The rest of the books? See the dramatization adaptation on Starz? Just curious. The loss of a child, unaccepted is a tragedy. Edward is very wise
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Rebadams7 chapter 9 . 9/7/2015
A.l sorts of odd smells and tastes from antibiotics. Who knew!
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Rebadams7 chapter 5 . 9/7/2015
Burns. Horrible pain and a creep towards death. A dire situation indeed
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Rebadams7 chapter 4 . 9/7/2015
Having you mention just4ALE brings a few tears to my eyes. What a brilliant light to loose in this world. What a wonderful Edward you've revealed
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Rebadams7 chapter 3 . 9/7/2015
The horoscope of war were already familiar to the young recruit
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Rebadams7 chapter 2 . 9/7/2015
The Silver Star is a rare award. Not often given to he living.
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