Reviews for The Girl Next Door
Shadow Leaf Nin chapter 42 . 9/3/2017
loved how you made the actor Peter Facinelli a character in the story (the same actor who played Dr. Carlisle Cullen in the movies)
blb1000 chapter 25 . 9/11/2016
I don't know about Matt calling Melisa "doll." It seems unusual and a little old for a teenager today.
blb1000 chapter 24 . 9/11/2016
And then he woke up and realized it was the morning if his birthday... ;)
blb1000 chapter 22 . 8/14/2016
So is he going to buy his own car or at least pay for insurance?
blb1000 chapter 20 . 8/14/2016
And 6 bathrooms? Wow!
blb1000 chapter 19 . 8/14/2016
And he'll need other doctors helping with his practice, I'm guessing.
blb1000 chapter 18 . 8/14/2016
Or have a word with her manager...
blb1000 chapter 15 . 8/12/2016
Nice twist with grandpa Charlie. :)
blb1000 chapter 13 . 8/10/2016
The last minute stay at Colin's house seemed strange after Matt spent the evening with Edward.
blb1000 chapter 10 . 8/9/2016
We haven't seen Bella tell Edward about her past, but Matt using terms like sperm donor would maybe give him an idea.
blb1000 chapter 9 . 8/9/2016
Here's Matt's chance to learn to cook too. I appreciate you using different names for B's children in thus story as well (not Ben or Lauren, etc.).
blb1000 chapter 8 . 8/9/2016
I think Edward would have described her sleep wear as a pink tank & shorts. If he knew the terms "cami" & "boy shorts," I'd be worried.
blb1000 chapter 7 . 8/9/2016
Thank you for making the blonde Claire & not Tanya, this time.
blb1000 chapter 6 . 8/9/2016
Nice date. And now I know they're in San Francisco. ;)
blb1000 chapter 4 . 8/8/2016
They are so very very polite with each other at this stage.
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