|Reviews for Making Memories of Us|
| muzaklover chapter 3 . 5/12/2010
I really hope that they can work past whatever is going on. Keep up the awesome work.
| Ant Upi chapter 3 . 5/12/2010
Like it,but still trying to figure out what's up with Bella.
| ObsessedwiththeCullens chapter 3 . 5/12/2010
good chapter love the way nessie said spagetti! Cute! cant wait for more :)
| LoveMeSomeAngst chapter 3 . 5/12/2010
I love me some angsty daddyward. I've cried a little with each chapter. Dying to know more about what's going on with Bella.
| mugglemom08 chapter 3 . 5/12/2010
"Daddy!" Nessie cried, rushing across the lawn to come see me. "We need a time-out! My Daddy's here!"
Jasper stood up and furrowed his brow. "Hey! No fair! When I asked for a time-out you said they weren't allowed," he teased.
LOL! Just like a 4-year-old to change the rules to suit themselves. :D
"Time-on!" she squealed as she ran for Jasper. He picked her up and carried her quickly away from Alice as she continued to try and tag them both.
"That's not even close to being fair, Jasper!" Alice cried out as I walked through the front door. Sometimes it was hard to believe she was a year older than me.
Cracked up at that image, too. :)
The words spewed forth before I could stop them. "You could have known all of this had you shown up. This shit's been going on almost three years, Bella. You'd think a person would want to spend time with their family. Especially when that person's marriage is ready to fall apart any day."
Definitely with Edward on this. And Bella should cut the cryptic shit and just tell him whatever it is that he's supposedly not seeing.
| christag banner chapter 3 . 5/12/2010
Okay, so the illness is that she went through a depression after Nessie was born? And apparently she should still be on meds and isn't. :( I sure hope she isn't cheating on him, he cares so much it would kill him.
Can't wait to read more.
| Daniixxmarie chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
i feel bad for edward :(
| twimom817 chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
I hope we soon find out what Bella's problem is. And poor Edward, Mr. Mom.
| ObsessedwiththeCullens chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
good chapter :) nessie is soo cute! :) how old is Alice though?
| christag banner chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
Ugh, the poor guy. Would love to see her side of this to see what is going on in her mind. I feel for Edward as I have been in his place while my husband works such hours and there are days that my kids don't see him for several at a time. :( Can't wait to see how they will get past this.
| amwine chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
It is so sad that Bella is missing out on her family. It is sad to think her daughter doesn't even ask about her anymore. That is huge Bella! I am worried about Edward! Great job...I can't wait for more...thanks so much!
| mugglemom08 chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
Daddyward makes me weak in the knees and I LOVED the interaction between this one and Renesmee.
| LoveMeSomeAngst chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Oh, this has major heartbreak written all over it. Me loves it!
| amwine chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
I like it, but the ending bothers me. I hate to think they argue all the time. Great job..thanks!
| xXKiwiCullenXx chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
Bella is just wrong! I like how this flips script. Instead of Bella at home playing the rejected housewife, we have Daddyward at home suffering for his wifes career! I really hope things work out.