|Reviews for A Deeper Shade of Black|
| Flying Penguin chapter 1 . 4/22
Love this story. I keep coming back to it and finding I enjoy your writing as much as I did the first time around.
| Esthelaaaa chapter 6 . 2/16
Ill just follow this story to make it look better to other readers, although i'm debating about whether to favourite it or not... It was amazing, but now i don't favourite very easily (i may have in the past, and have long since removed the ones that i remember weren't all that amazing). I'll think about it...
But thanks anyway! It was great fun reading what you wrote; you have the mind of a writer! There may be no flowery descriptions or convoluted sentences with verbose words, but i think that really takes away from a story; particularly short little pieces like this one. So good job!
| S chapter 6 . 8/7/2014
She put 2and2 togetherrrrrrr and he was waiting there for her to accept herrrrrr omgggg the best ending the best one night stand the best reaction from Misaki...
Lady? This was just fantabulous. Thank youuuuuuuuu
| A chapter 5 . 8/7/2014
Im the puddle of goo here. Coz of your amazing writing!
One thing maybe is you could have written a different phrase for the synapse in her brain firing when he touched her since you used it already.
But it was super good.
| S chapter 4 . 8/7/2014
Couldn't get better!
| S chapter 3 . 8/7/2014
I can't believe she's so blasé about meeting bk201 and she knows there's 99% probability it's for sex. Amazing! So Misaki
| S chapter 2 . 8/7/2014
Yay greasy food and Li kun!
Yay water splash ;)
And yay a meeting
| S chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Imagine me sitting on a bench in that park with my jaw on the floor.
Ie, my mouth hanging open.
Misaki not stopping her attack which was totally cool.
| soupcan chapter 6 . 7/28/2014
I really like this. I wish the relationship between Hei and Misaki was explored more in the series, so it's kind of nice to see you do it here. .
| Error 404 - Talent Not Found chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
I've got to say, I quite liked that, you write fight scenes very well. Your writing style fits the tone of the story too, which is excellent. It's descriptive wihout being too overbearing. In terms of characterisation, it's pretty accurate- except for the end, but you needed to work out that romance-but-not-quite-a-romace thing so it's justified. Although, I don't really like where this is going- wellI like where it's going, I just don't like how it is. Still it was a very enjoyable read with vivid imagery and beautiful characterisation for the most part. It was quite great.
| anthropomorphychan chapter 6 . 7/3/2013
I never really knew which pairing to ship in DTB - but I gotta say, I do love these two.
Loved the story! Hei is such a sweetie.
| CarnivorousOak chapter 6 . 6/29/2013
Woa. That's some really good writing. I like Misaki's voice and her observations about what's around her.
| RedAlex chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
A good history, hope to read more from you
| juggernaut715 chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Ho ho ho, this is interesting.
| Beitrix chapter 6 . 3/1/2013
love how you wrote this without actually writing the sex scene. Foreplay, yes, sex no. made tje story great!