Reviews for A Deeper Shade of Black
SystemicX chapter 6 . 6/28
This was such a good read that I found this years ago but I had to come back and re read it to make sure I didn't imagine the whole thing.

Your writing is amazing. Aside from it being hot as hell what I loved most about this was you put them in a near impossible situation and still kept them both true to their character. A lot of DTB fanfic doesn't do this very well resulting in a lot of ooc-ness. But this right here was wonderful.

Keep writing!
YellowWomanontheBrink chapter 6 . 6/13
Ahhh this ending was probably the most perfect way this fic could have ended. I love how Misaki figured it out, and their interaction at the end had a stupid smile stuck on my face it was so fucking cute I'm like squeeing. Great fic!
YellowWomanontheBrink chapter 5 . 6/13
This and the last chapter gave me LIFE. uRGH I'mso in love with this fic and this premise. I love it, the thoughtfulness, the planning and forethought, Hei and Misaki being perfectly in character...this is so good
YellowWomanontheBrink chapter 1 . 6/13
Oh my god this is the first chapter and this is perfectly in character and very, very hot. I LOVE this!
Sinthija chapter 6 . 11/26/2016
So wish there was more to this.
SuperSegovia123 chapter 6 . 8/29/2015
I rarely leave a review, but I thought this story deserved one. First of all, fantastic execution of story line and keeping the characters as true to themselves. I truly was expecting a very angsty ending, but I'm very, very grateful you decided to the end story the way you did. There were many times when I chuckled because the rebukes from the characters, and it takes a lot out of me to chuckle on something on the internet now a days. Again, I absolutely adore this story and your writing. It will be a story that I will always remember.
fruckaduck chapter 3 . 6/1/2015
...hold on she brought the whole box?...wow big expectations...lol...
Flying Penguin chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
Love this story. I keep coming back to it and finding I enjoy your writing as much as I did the first time around.
KarismaticKoala chapter 6 . 2/16/2015
Ill just follow this story to make it look better to other readers, although i'm debating about whether to favourite it or not... It was amazing, but now i don't favourite very easily (i may have in the past, and have long since removed the ones that i remember weren't all that amazing). I'll think about it...

But thanks anyway! It was great fun reading what you wrote; you have the mind of a writer! There may be no flowery descriptions or convoluted sentences with verbose words, but i think that really takes away from a story; particularly short little pieces like this one. So good job!
S chapter 6 . 8/7/2014
She put 2and2 togetherrrrrrr and he was waiting there for her to accept herrrrrr omgggg the best ending the best one night stand the best reaction from Misaki...
Ay.
Dude.
Lady? This was just fantabulous. Thank youuuuuuuuu
A chapter 5 . 8/7/2014
Im the puddle of goo here. Coz of your amazing writing!

So good...
One thing maybe is you could have written a different phrase for the synapse in her brain firing when he touched her since you used it already.
But it was super good.
S chapter 4 . 8/7/2014
Soooo hot!
Couldn't get better!
S chapter 3 . 8/7/2014
Tee hee!

I can't believe she's so blasé about meeting bk201 and she knows there's 99% probability it's for sex. Amazing! So Misaki
S chapter 2 . 8/7/2014
Yay greasy food and Li kun!
Yay water splash ;)
And yay a meeting
Superb writing
S chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Imagine me sitting on a bench in that park with my jaw on the floor.
Ie, my mouth hanging open.
Omg.
Action.
Bullets.
Flying.
Hot kidnapping.
Hei.
Misaki not stopping her attack which was totally cool.
Neck whispering.
Love this!
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