Reviews for No Longer Hatchlings
QuestionableIntentions chapter 11 . 1/6/2017
why the HELL did saint have to go and disappear off the face of the earth? now there's this amazing story sitting here and not getting updated! it's just dying! i wish saint was still here :(
ForeverFoxy7 chapter 11 . 12/25/2016
Nice! It's really good like usual. :) What's Anita's power? Does she have wings? I got a little lost there about who has wings and who doesn't so maybe you can fill me in? Most of its great though. Love the action. :D
THE BACON NINJA WITH WINGS chapter 6 . 2/7/2013
If I were Max, I would probably burst out laughing at the fact that Fang had a redhead. Yup. Cause... Okay, I had something to say here, but I don't remember, but I found a banana in my bed this morning.
the-sleepdeprived chapter 11 . 1/14/2013
YAY! Saint updated! Hooray!
You May Call Me Master chapter 11 . 1/11/2013
It's very good. I like it. I like where it's going. And I forgive you for taking so long to update. Just getting to read the chapter is enough to make up for it.
Rothaway chapter 11 . 1/11/2013
Can Max get a new power? If she's meant to "take care of the threats" well she's going to need something more than warp speed even though she's more of a "work with what you got" person
maxridelover chapter 11 . 1/11/2013
what a jerk dylan is!
You May Call Me Master chapter 10 . 8/28/2012
I love this...
Update soon?
Silverkiss-Iceheart chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
Why have thou not updated?!
I'm completely in love with the fanfiction Saint. Not your best work, but I couldn't exactly tell you which that is though...
Anyways, Toby is great, and his first line in the fic! Loved it, sounded a lot like my brother whenever I pull a space off like that. Skylark is cool, honestly she reminds me of myself on my bad days... anti-social, cool and just generally negative to the potential of humankind. Doing good on capturing Max's personality in the style, her utter sarcasm and the like. And I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going.
Btw, where do you get your herring? The rubber one you gave your reviewers that I had... well Shadow ate it... I swear he's more cat than human/annoying voice.
Sehar chapter 10 . 7/30/2012
Sehar chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
As much as I hate cheesy everything-is-going-to-be-okay-in-the-ends, please, please, PLEASE, make this a everything-is-going-to-be-okay-in-the-end! Make Dylan die or at least very injured, and Fang come back, and the rest of his flock go to Florida or something and be happy about it, let Max and Fang and the rest of the Flock live happily ever after! Fantasizing is my thing, and let me tell you, i'm extremely good at it. So ya know i was just doing what i do best up there. but just putting it out there for know just in case you run outta ideas...
AbsolutelyAbbie chapter 10 . 6/23/2012
I'm glad the two groups are getting along. That, at least, is AWESOME! And, yet another reason I LOOOVEEE Toby. Seriously, he's the BEST.

And, note to self; TV brings people together. Maybe Max and Fang should watch some TV together! (;

Poor Skylark... I hope things clear up soon. If only for her sake. (:
AbsolutelyAbbie chapter 9 . 6/23/2012
It actually sounds like it could work really well! All the stories I've read of Fang being a father... He's been really good at. He's better with emotions than Max, too. And children are FULL of emotions. Like, if Bobby and Susie start fighting over a toy train, you can't just fly away. You know?

And, oh Fang...

Oh, Max...

Poor, teenaged bird-kids who have too many emotions for them to manage... Will they ever work things out?
AbsolutelyAbbie chapter 8 . 6/23/2012
So, she still cares about Fang after all... Dylan and Nudge... I kind of think they'd make a cute couple. They just seem like they'd work good together, you know? They'd just sort of get each other.

Anywayyy. Fang's voice. Is it all fortune-cookie misterioso like Max's, or is it different? Maybe it's straight-forward; the opposite of Max's. It'd be kind of funny- their voices would be like their opposite, but like the other person in their crazy relationship. (:
AbsolutelyAbbie chapter 7 . 6/23/2012
Ha! Poor Fang... Two brain attacks now. I wonder what Max'll have to say... Glad that the old Flock is taking the new Flock... In stride...? (;
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