|Reviews for Unglued|
| Peya Luna chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
O.O i sure hope that youre gonna write a chapter about how exactly lizie became a cybertronian borg...aside from that, i totally loved the baby talk, optimus as an octupus, what a mental picture!
| aniay chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
ah dear fem, that was adorable. Makes me want to write the little story my daughter thought out with my help
And thank you :*
| SeverusDmitri18 chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
wow, that was interesting short story. Hope you make it longer.
| Peya Luna chapter 2 . 5/5/2010
ROFL! poor bee, jazz is truly a little perv - lets exchange our secret human porn collection, my a#! im SO hoping for a part 2 of this talk, after bee found out that it is very much possible ;-)
| Flamekaat chapter 2 . 5/5/2010
* Thoroughly Adores* I went and read the fiction written by sakon76 before I came back and read yours so I would not be spoilered, It was awesome. this is awesome and there is nothing as awesome as BeeMikaela/Sam especially since its so cutsey and sweet, Love not just lust and it's awesomeness is beyond awesomeness. Thank you now write some more.
| Joyfull Scroll chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Wow! I haven't READ the previous to this... But I will AFTER reviewing this one!
I LOVED this one! It's odd that this pairing is not more common but I really enjoyed how Bumblebee EXPLAINED to Sam his reasonings behind their joining from HIS part. Also how this ended with both understanding Sam at his revelation
| Peya Luna chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
amazing, beautiful,simply wow...and now i so need to check out the story that inspired this little jewel.
| Steelfeathers chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Since you asked so nicely, I'm going to review your first and only story for you.
While you were right in that threesome-alien-sex isn't really my cup of tea, I have to admit that I liked sci-fi goodness of the very first paragraph. (I have an interface wire fetish, I swear it.) Overall, this was a very neat and tidy little character exploration oneshot, and it has me curious to see what Simulacra is all about...although on the other hand I'm weary of reading it for fear that her ideas will corrupt the (probably) similar ideas I have for future chapters on Instability.
Anyway, the content itself is good, but you need to check that every sentence has subject-object agreement and is not a fragment. The grammar mistakes don't detract from the meaning (unlike some other hideous stories I have read) but they are a little jarring.
To conclude, nice start and keep writing! The only way to get better is to write (type) until your keyboard stops working.