|Reviews for The Last Spartan|
| wolf chapter 50 . 11/15
please update soon this is a great story that has officially gotten me hooked.
| wolf chapter 27 . 11/13
so yeah you missed out in CEO for one thing there is the bandana skull which grants INFINITE AMMO and that includes grenades.
| Guest chapter 50 . 11/12
When u remake this story, set it in mass effect 2 when Shepard recruit the spartan.
| He Who See's chapter 1 . 11/9
| Guest chapter 50 . 11/5
Are you ever going to update or are you like all the others who write and give up?
| Bear of Cali chapter 50 . 11/4
Damn you, DinoJake. Damn you! I loved this story, and I loved its writing. I loved its premise, and its setting. I loved how it wasn't another 'UNSC instead of Human Alliance. War happens.' Those are a dime a dozen, and I am tired of them. This was a breathe of fresh air, and being head by the Master Chief, instead of some Gary Stu/Mary Sue Shepard. Glorious, wonderful, awesome!
Now the story is dead.
Damn you, DinoJake. You say that I should look for other stories that are better than this one. If there is, then I don't want them. I want this one. This was my favorite fanfiction, one that I was excited to read a new chapter, one that I would reread ever now and then. And now, it is dead.
In the end, what can I do? This is your story. I only wish good fortunes for you DinoJake. Goodbye my friend.
| ArchangleMV chapter 4 . 10/30
you forgot the th in stealth but great story so far
| Sakurada Kiritsugu chapter 37 . 10/29
SWEET MERCIFUL NIPPLE!? WHAT!?
I CAN'T TAKE IT, MY STOMACH! I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING!
| Sakurada Kiritsugu chapter 35 . 10/29
I have a lot of comments for this chapter. It started as just one comment but I kept seeing more great and hilarious things to comment on and I keep end up with more things to say. So I'm just gonna say that this chapter has so much win in it, I don't know where to begin.
| Vexacus905 chapter 50 . 10/28
PLEASE BE MASTER CHIEF X TALI ROMANCE. AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
| Guest chapter 50 . 10/23
If you're going to remake this story, then u should do a recruitment mission for master chief on mass effect 2
| abraxas01 chapter 3 . 10/24
I have a lot of trouble with this story. I find it hard to believe, no... unbelievable that humans/covies would give up a superior form of FTL, a tactical, strategic, and proven friends in Smart AI's and the far superior tech that both the UNSC and covy forces had/were developing for the severe limitations placed on them with the new tech and the restrictions by the council.
| Eltyr chapter 3 . 10/21
Awwwwwwww, you mentioned Daisy :3 But how come you didn't mention Fred Kelly and Linda, Chief's Blue Team buddies?
| Rushi chapter 50 . 10/17
| DYnoJackal19 chapter 33 . 10/12
May I suggest rewriting Zaeed's recruitment mission? Just read Mass Emile by Ranschaj if you need inspiration.