Reviews for Him
leaky.oven chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Wait wait wait... Edward's a horse?

(ahahaha, welp I guess that makes sense in a 'Hildago' story kinda way)
Drowning in Chaos chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
wow! Amazingly well done! LOVED it!
CharliDenae chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Oh my God! LOL! I was getting pissed... how could Jasper keep talking about this 'guy', but still plan to marry 'his' Alice? Up until he swung himself "up into the saddle", I was wondering where the heck you were going with this. Brilliant! Hilarious! I totally loved it!
Podder6691 chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Wow! I was fooled right up to the last minute . You really should go for some slash too ... I loved your wonderful descriptive writing hunny xxx
kymclark chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Why am I just now reading this, I don't know. You have stunned me again babe with your writing brilliance.

Beautiful, Beautiful- the imagery was amazing and you had me a little fooled thinking it was some slash or something. LOL

Then I got it! Awesome job sweetie! You blow me away! :)

(hugs)

Kym

xx
KimiD chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Oh! you so GOT me! Up until the very end of the story. Anything that smack of wrong pairings, I usually do not even finish the story. Even a hint, and I back out of the story right then, BUT the way he was still talking about "his" alice made me continue to read. All I can say is... Swee eeet! Great writing, I REALLY, REALLY enjoyed this one. KimiD
fairyqueenie chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Omg loving the twist totally wasn't expecting Edward the horse.

Great story x
kirifox chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
OMG...Edward's a HORSE! Mwahahahahaha!
VSPS chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Ha! You had me going there... and I had to read the ending twice to get it! Great o/s - I'm suppose to say that SarahAH30 and the Major sent me - from the Majors Army recommendations... thanks - V
SarahAH30 chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
WOW that was awesome honey, I really didn't see that twist coming at the end. Brilliant.
84gemstone chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Ok so Jo said read it it's about Jasper and Edward well i have to say i didn't see that coming great twist
joayla chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
That was real clever! Fantastic!
joayla chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
That was real clever! Fantastic!
FrozenSoldier chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Edward's a horse? Hahahah. I cannot stop laughing, for real he's a horse? I was totally expecting him to be some guy. But okay, it was a nice twist!
Lori94 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
LOL! Edward the HORSE? ROFLMAO!
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