|Reviews for Ash in the Wind|
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/27/2014
Love this story, please update
i hope you have another chapter ready :)
| Please-update chapter 3 . 10/27/2014
I hope i can inspire you to write another chapter (or 2 ;) ) even if its been 4 years... i would love to read more x
| BetaWolfSis chapter 3 . 9/6/2014
This is an awesome story! Could you continue it? How is it gonna end? How's Eloise? Is Amber really jealous? How are their jobs gonna be? Ooooooooh I cant wait to read the rest! And for your info.,You are not boring!
| Optomistic Emo Kleptomaniac chapter 3 . 9/3/2012
thia looks awesome you should carry on XD
| joshuahanna09 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
i thought this was a good start to a novel or book or whatever, but i was a bit confused. are they all still late teens or in their thirties?
anyway, i read the alpha force series and i really liked them, but i wish that the author had spent more time on the characters relationships, and personal developement. if you are going to make this a real novel, i think you could create really good emotional dramatic situations.
anyway, something to think about...
| girl-crazy-4-VampyreSpeed chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
please please please please update soon!
seems great! i always wondered what happened next, i want another story to be written and also, i want to know who Alex goes out with!
So yeah, update soon, the story is GREAT!
| ImplausiblyForgetful chapter 3 . 5/16/2010
Hmm... I think I'm going to like this fic. Like the entire jealous thing you got going there
| emmadactryl chapter 3 . 5/9/2010
A jealous Amber is always amusing. What I'm really enjoying about this is so far I have absolutely no idea where this fic is heading. I'm also enjoying the fast updates and the wonderful characterisation- spot on.
| emmadactryl chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
You have completely nailed the team banter, which is awesome and makes non-actiony chapters not a bother to read at all. So the poor things all have dull jobs, eh? Well, I'm sure their holiday will turn things all around and give them more than enough excitement and adventure. Can't wait for chapter three :)
| be-nice-to-nerds chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Pretty good for a first fic!
You kept everyone in character, kept the action going and i think the pacing in this chapter was well done.
I'd like to se a little more context, but I'm guessing that comes next chapter. Which I'm looking forward too.
Well done, keep it up, and I look forward to more in the (hopefully) near future.
| emmadactryl chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
What an awesome start to a fic! Action, excitement and very well written. I'm really looking forward to future chapters and can't wait to see your take on this challenge :D