|Reviews for Disappearance|
| Michelle chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
What a sweet and nice story!
| Trevor X chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
I prepared to read some good, old fashioned reminiscing. Instead, Mark ducks out the back door. :P
Well, good job writing your chosen pairing. Mark seems kinda flamboyant for someone trying to keep a low profile. Might be just me seeing that though.
| patattack chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Nice story. Liked how you portrayed the characters. It'd be interesting to see more like this, but the decision's yours.
| Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Hey, Stefan-sama! I caught this fic and it sounded interesting, so I thought I'd review. I really liked it! Out of curiosity, are you planning to write more? It struck me as a one-shot and it worked as such, but I was just wondering
Anyways, I didn't really look for any grammar/spelling errors to nitpick, though from a cursory glance this seems well-written enough, the only lil' caveat I would have is near the beginning...the 'king' referenced is Eliwood? I think he's a marquess, since he just runs the canton of Pherae, which isn't really a kingdom. u_u But that's just me. Anyways, I liked the Eliwood/Lyn, since it's something we don't see a lot of, and I really liked the tactician's characterization, especially how he wanted to stay out of the spotlight and hand the glory over to Roy. Nice work, Stefan-sama! :)