Reviews for Technicolor Dreams
TheWhiteRook chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Walter had the good benefit that fedora-Peter was so interested in keeping paralyzed-Walter healthy and happy. The way you showed Walter's side of the story, a little bit at least, didn't necessarily let him off the hook for what he did, but it did let you see where he was coming from a bit more. Loved it.
MadeOfStars chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Deep and dark. I like you doing a character examination of the dream Walter, a story about a story-within-a-story. Either Walter has to wonder about mortality and morality and redemption, if it is even possible. I am not sure how to put this next bit into words, but I'll try. You create sympathy for a character that may or may not really deserve it, possibly because you get across that he is not sure he deserves it, which makes him kinda deserve it. If that makes sense...