| Reviews for A Midsummer's Dream |
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   sammyamber123 chapter 12 . 6/13/2013 I've Just stayed up all night to finish reading this! I just couldn't stop! It's really good and I can't wait for the next part! |
| Rosalind du Coudray chapter 8 . 2/6/2013 Great chapter! Working through this story when I can, and I hate putting it down! So FFN-714 would have to be *F*an*F*iction.*N*et and then the numbers come from your story's id number: 5940*714* Either way, I love this story so much so far! |
| Mary Mab chapter 1 . 12/29/2012 just putting in bookmark so i know where i am tomorrow night... till tomorrow :) :b :) |
| This Username Is Classified chapter 7 . 10/26/2012 Will there be a baby POV? :3 |
| Random Peep chapter 5 . 10/26/2012 Omg! The babies' POV was great! So cute |
| annavance92 chapter 12 . 7/27/2012 amazingggg! i cant wait till you put the next part up :) |
| bunnita yazzie chapter 12 . 6/12/2012 I read the sequel and this one the very last chapter made me cry, which coming from me is i hope u finish this story soon |
| OokamiLover19 chapter 12 . 4/15/2012 ThIs story was really good even though the chapters while Sakura was emprisoned were really dark and hard to read. |
| blackbutterbly1997 chapter 12 . 2/8/2012 Well it was good just very sad at the end but also good too |
| SensationHorror chapter 11 . 1/16/2012 Good story loved it, but hate that the little girl had to died :( |
| Freak-With-Issues chapter 11 . 1/14/2012 I can't wait for the next chapter! This story was so creative! I was all, "GAARA! GET OFF YOUR SANDY ASS AND GET HER BACK!" |
| icepop57119 chapter 11 . 12/23/2011 awww! i wanna know what happens! oh...i wonder! ...ugh hope you update soon...but its been like 6 months so i doubt it... *sigh* ohhhhhhh i NEED to know... *cries like all hell broke loose* lol |
| Avid Reader chapter 11 . 12/22/2011 Aw such a sad but happy delivery. now on to the next chapter where gaara and sakura are finally together! |
| Toreh chapter 6 . 7/16/2011 I think you are a good writer and great with detail however, I've been trying to read this but I feel as though your story plot is just all over the place. You're making Sakura extremely irresponsible and stupid. Like really, if all of those things are happening such as bloody nose, bruises appearing on the stomach, and other stuff happening, why wouldn't she go to the hospital? If she cares for the baby so much, it would be her first priority to go get help. It's pretty unreleastic to make her ignore all of that. Also, why is Sasuke still roaming free after hurting Sakura. He clearly has evil intent, wouldn't Tsunade have taken care of his? He shouldn't even have been able to walk around the village after coming back from being a missing nin. Every second something is happening to her and it's pretty tiring. Then Gaara is screaming at her about not caring for the baby because she does all of these stupid things with no logical reason for doing them. I just think many of these events could have been avoided. I understand that you want to create drama in the story, but it just makes Sakura seem very stupid and uncaring. I think less is more would really apply. And really, while arguing with sasuke she'd put her arms around him just to make Gaara jealous after Sasuke did all those things? Highly unrealistic. Definitely not a flame. Just some criticism. |
| BloodyWeapons40Bubble chapter 11 . 7/1/2011 Awww...cute chapter update soon :) |