This was very insightful, as well as really interesting! To me, it's hard to believe that Light would ever regret being Kira, but the way you wrote it, it's actually believable, which I like. And I love the way that you incorperated BB into it all! He's one of my favorite characters, so...yeah. But the part that I loved the most was where Light though of what L would say to him. That really stood out to me. It's very hard to write L, because he's such a unique person. But the way he spoke, I actually felt like that was something he would say to Light. The whole thing is very short, yet you manage to capture everything perfectly. Your writing is very mature and I absolutely love that. It's awfully hard to find new, good oneshots these days. I'd have to say, yours is one of favorites! All in all, you did fantastically well! I hope I can read more of your work soon! xD

Oh, wow. I really, really enjoyed this. I never expected anyone to be able to delve into such a twisted, sociopathic mind without getting it either completely wrong, or missing the point entirely. You did neither. In fact, it exceeded my expectations.

-Zephyr

Your title wins. For real, gave me chills.

Very depressing fic. But much better than most of the "getting inside Light's head" fics I've read before. You actually understand him.

I enjoyed it very much. ]

Oh wow!

A berrer writer? You're amazing as it is!

You compleatly understoon lights character and brought new depths and emotion to it!

Kudos :)

(and it IS me, i'm just using a school computer and I really don't want to log in...i'd honestly forget to log out)

-Ashi

Wow. That was amazing.