Reviews for Build Me Up
Nathan fan chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
This is just beautiful! It's exactly the kind of thoughtful thing that I picture Rick doing for Kate and I'd also have to say that you are lucky to have just such a friend also!
phalangesbyfive chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Very sweet! I loved it.
Sparrow49 chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Very sweet story. Thank you for making me smile!
dano010 chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Sweet story.
Elisabeth-P chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Beckett NYPD chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
It's nice to have a friend at times.
OrionTheHunter chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
This is a nice little story. It's fairly well in character, which is good.

You could use some proof reading, spell check just isn't enough. One example is the line, :choose a movie while I but the foot on". I just bring it up as constructive criticism.

Anyway, thanks for writing.
softer chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
you should definitely continue this
I think you did a fabulous job here.
"After Kate had put in the dvd she hesitantly resided next to him leaving enough room between the two of them to accommodate the elephant in the room."
can't wait to see more of this fic.
I'm Widget chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Oh, he's so sweet! I can totally see him doing that. Will there be more? Hope so.