Reviews for The Boy On The Moon
Song of Grey Lemons chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Oh, wow! This is beautiful! It has the same voice as the book itself! It is like a deleted scene for the story. Good work!
Silvara chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Is the story's plot already decided? I can't tell much based on this chapter, but I think there may be a little too much adjectives, descriptions, and the LP thoughts are a too many and too rational for my present comfort. I'll wait to read more to give more objective criticism.
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Not bad! Very cute! It would be adorable to have him meet the Aviator, eh? XD
Surf-merGirl1963 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Very cool! It seems like a lost scene from the book or something. Thanks for writing a 'Little Prince' fanfiction and welcome to the category!