Reviews for Sisters
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
Petunia846 chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Oh, now that was nice. I was kind of confused at first by Fiona laughing, it didn't feel like the right characterization, but then as I kept reading it made more sense and now I think it was a good choice.

My most favoritest line of all was: "Fiona's laughter died down, though it still danced in her eyes." Although, the ending was very nice as well.
Cliche Melancholy chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
I really liked that last line, about the slamming door like a shotgun. It was very powerful and I could hear the slam in my mind as I read it. Good job.

A little short, especially for something dramatic like this, but had it been any longer, it might have become distracting or take away from the main point. So you did very well with it.

It's awesome-you're getting a lot of these Burn Notice one-shots out. This section certainly could use more of them-way to go! Keep writing!