Reviews for The Hunt
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6
Walking with Pliocene Dromaeosaurs: Dinofelis vs Pliocene Guanlongs
Dinofelis took a wildebeest down as the herbivore falls to the ground
Dinofelis: (roars) as 9 Pliocene Guanlongs came to attack to steal the wildebeest carcass
Male Pliocene Guanlong: (roars) as it calls it's pack
As the solitary hunter. the Dinofelis has choice to stand it's ground and 9 Pliocene Guanlongs surrounded the cat, 1 Pliocene Guanlong attack and got slashed by the Dinofelis's claws as other Pliocene Guanlongs charge and the Dinofelis slashed it's claws on a second Pliocene Guanlong's leg, 3 Pliocene Guanlongs jump to Dinofelis's back, a Male Pliocene Guanlong bites to Dinofelis's leg, the Dinofelis falls to the ground in pain and escaped, as the Pack took the carcass of a wildebeest
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29
Walking with Dinosaurs Dromaeosaur Evolution- The Hunt
A Pack of 8 Ovosaurus rex are hunting a herd of Pachycephalosaurus
2 Ovosaurus Rex charge at the herd, a Male Pachycephalosaurus was separate from the herd, 3 Ovosaurus rex attacked by the leg, 1 Ovosaurus rex Bring the Pachycephalosaurus down by the neck,
Pachycephalosaurus:(Bellows) as the other Pachycephalosaurus escape, Ovosaurus rex: (roars) as it sunk it's teeth on Pachycephalosaurus's throat, 2 Ovosaurus rex killed it by windpipe and it's over, The pack leader stood over his kill. The other elders stood around him, feeding off of the best bits of the carcass. other 2 feeding on the legs, 1 was eating a Pachycephalosaurus's stomach.
that's why Ovosaurus rex hunt in packs, they worked as a pack to Bring down any large prey like Iguanodons, Styracosaurus, Parasaurolophus, Torosaurus, Hypsilophodons, Charonosaurus.
Markings: As Brown English mastiff with Spots on it's back and Black stripes on it's tail, White underbelly, Black and Brown patterns on it's legs
Size: of African leopards
LShinigami2be chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
Wow, it's like Your explaining their nature. Very good.
dawn257 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Pretty good. You might consider reading the novel Raptor Red by Robert Bakker. You might like it.
IanO chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
This is really good, and something much more different than usually put on this site. The only constructive comment I'll make is that you can probably combine some of your short, choppy sentences into longer sentences to help it flow better. But otherwise,very vivid descriptions and nicely built tension.