Reviews for The Hunt
LShinigami2be chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
Wow, it's like Your explaining their nature. Very good.
dawn257 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Pretty good. You might consider reading the novel Raptor Red by Robert Bakker. You might like it.
IanO chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
This is really good, and something much more different than usually put on this site. The only constructive comment I'll make is that you can probably combine some of your short, choppy sentences into longer sentences to help it flow better. But otherwise,very vivid descriptions and nicely built tension.