Reviews for Reluctant Hero
alohaflower chapter 3 . 1/19
I like that the waterbenders first thought is that they would kill the Avatar while that's something Zuko's also worried about. It really makes it seem like a consistent threat and the 'fire nation attitude'.
FliscentFiretail chapter 45 . 12/27/2021
I enjoy coming back to reread this fiction every now and again. the jiangshi are really creepy fun and that was wild how you managed to tied the Wendigo into Sokka's hunger for meat, perfectly playing off of something we all consider a part of his character but giving it a sinister twist. I'll admit reading that while tipsy and all alone was really scary but fun. I live in the great white north where winter is deadly so I can relate when you describe Sokkas time as a child in the south pole with the creature. ive also seen some unexplained things before so I understand not wanting to acknowledge something that scares you but you know is right there. your scary parts gave me chills haha. I'm also excited for how this story is going to turn out, I love how you add new things but they are all relevant to the plot. I'm a binge reader so whenever I circle back to reread this I read it from beginning to end in a couple of days. if you want, since I usually let the story play aloud while I work on stuff I could potentially beta all the chapters for misspelling and Grammer since it plays the story aloud as written and I can hear the difference between where and were lol. it's pretty well done already, but if you want just ask me. also if you need anything else just let me know and I'll do what I can. hope that you're well and your muse will find you when you get the chance. best of luck!
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 44 . 12/26/2021
Dang it! Now I have two reasons to want the Northern ship to find Zuko.
1. For Zuko to kick Kun Tien's butt.
2. Cause Yue is on it and I wanna see more Yue/Zuko. Their awkward interactions amuse me.

Okay now reason 1 has changed.
1. So Iroh can take on both Pakku and Kun Tien and beat the crap out of them for trying to take Zuko's mind.
3. So Zuko and his crew can take on the Pirates.

I liked Nuobi teaching Yue. Is she about to discover she can water bend or is The Ocean gonna help her out or Nuobi or is a pirate gonna fish her out?

Anyway can't wait till next chapter! ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 43 . 12/26/2021
Aww! Iroh's sons learning to love tea because they love Iroh.

A dragon egg, Appa and Momo on the Wani is something I never new I NEEDED. Thank you. ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 41 . 12/26/2021
Sokka is an essential character to the narrative as the meat and sarcasm guy and the fact that he knows it is hilarious.

Also cool that someone other than Ty Lee can see auras.
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 40 . 12/26/2021
Blue Spirit is the coolest. Quite possibly my favorite episode too.
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 40 . 12/25/2021
I much prefer this interaction of Zhao and Iroh. Also Sokka becoming a Fire Sage is a hilarious idea.
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 38 . 12/25/2021
GO SOKKA! Very awesome chapter. Sokka shined by staying behind to save the others and appeasing the Tiger-Elk.
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 38 . 12/25/2021
...Spooky.
You did great with Sokka though.
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 36 . 12/25/2021
A Squidopus?

Grammerly is something else. For the longest time the only ads I ever heard were Grammerly.
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 35 . 12/25/2021
Aang just pulled a Sokka and ate a random plant.
Singing? SECRET TUNNEL! Through the dungeon! Secret, Secret, Secret, SECRET TUNNEL! XD

...MY CABBAGES!

Dragon fights are cool.
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 34 . 12/25/2021
Aang totally pulled a Scooby Doo and jumped onto Shaggy, or in this case Zuko.
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 33 . 12/25/2021
I LOVE that it was a push door. Not friend and I were just talking last night about scenes where a character pushes on a pull door. Not the same but still funny.

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A beautiful mountain hermit?

Poor Miki...
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 32 . 12/25/2021
You mean platypus-bear right?
Surely you mean walrus-bear?
Hurray for Momo!
Chevalier Lecteur chapter 31 . 12/25/2021
Someone needs to put a beatdown on this breath stealing creature! Also never argue with Sokka's instincts.

And of course- it's a grease map.
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