Reviews for The White Comanche
sweetsouthernsongbird chapter 5 . 10/15/2016
I really enjoyed this story. Definitely will have to check out the real story it was based on.
Kitty16kat chapter 1 . 8/31/2016
I love your story I've never read anything like it
Willowstar23 chapter 5 . 8/18/2015
Really great story!
Clementine Buttersnaps chapter 5 . 5/8/2015
I really liked this. I'd love to read the rest of your works.
CourtneyHowlett chapter 5 . 9/21/2014
I'm so glad that you decided to write this! :)
CourtneyHowlett chapter 4 . 9/21/2014
Awww... cute!
CourtneyHowlett chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
Loved this chapter(: glad she was joined by a new baby!
CourtneyHowlett chapter 2 . 9/21/2014
Wow! Great chapter. I love Jacob, and his shyness.
CourtneyHowlett chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
I love this so far! You write like a pro.
Deonne chapter 5 . 6/10/2014
I have been looking everywhere for this story. It wasn't until someone put one of those please help me find up that I stumbled upon this and others.
Amazingly written and do happy to finally add them to my fav list.
PurpleFairy11 chapter 5 . 3/2/2014
this is a really good and interesting story
cullensrule chapter 5 . 2/17/2014
I found your story really interesting and even better they it was based on a real life story. It was just like an old western movie.
my2galspal chapter 5 . 2/13/2014
What a nice little fic. Thanks for sharing it.
Child of Dreams chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
Um...exactly how old is Bella?
And speaking of age, how old is Tyler?
Hidden-Shadow-of-Me chapter 5 . 8/12/2013
This story only had 99 reviews, and that's just annoying, so I thought I'd pitch in.

;) When I was younger, I was always fascinated by Native American stories too, so finding this story was an unexpected treat. Small graces for being born in the tech centry and not the adventure one, because MAN they had it bad back then!

Loved your portrayal of 'Jake' in this story, and I like that 'Bella' did get to see him again at the end. Thanks for your hard work and dedication to making it as true as possible!

-the Shadow
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