|Reviews for Bite me, Baby!|
| Akakuro Seiya chapter 8 . 7/8
I love Cloud here. XD He's so badass. Please update soon. Love the story!
| LoreilDarksky00 chapter 8 . 7/6
I stumbled onto this this hot mess like an hour ago and I binged straight from this fridge that is filled with blessed Sweet Mother Teresa and Jesus' tears held in the carved out husk of a donated unicorn horn, decorated with pheonix downs.
I am absolutely in love with this story, and I can't wait for more! The way you write the characters is so engaging and realistic (I sat here laughing at, like, four in the morning. And I'm a silent night owl, so that's saying something.) and all I want is more of their sass and adorable anger fits and goodness please keep writing this if you can because if you don't I will cry.
The only thing I can suggest as far as constructive criticism is spell checking on your own or with a beta because occasionally you miss a letter or two (for ex, -ed) at the end of a word, but we all know what you meant. :3
I know I'm going to keep an eye out on this Holy Grail of a story! I look forwards to the next chapter!
| Shadowheart51 chapter 8 . 7/2
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 8 . 7/1
I like it a lot! **
| madworld27 chapter 8 . 7/1
What is the history between Cloud and Leon? How will the Strifes know their mates? So many questions. I look forward to the next installment. :)
| SpiritOfTheLandXIII chapter 8 . 7/1
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH! MY FACE HURTS FROM SMILING TOO MUCH! THAT WAS TOO CUTE~!
i love it!
ahahahahahahahahahaha poor Axel. even if the goddess had heard him he would probably go ignored too XD
| YullenLover1215 chapter 8 . 7/1
Thanks for updating, this story is awesome and I can't wait for the next update.
| UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 8 . 7/1
dude that was awesome, i look forward to reading more strife humor, and this new interesting twist on newborn vamps. update soon please :)
| ladynikkie chapter 8 . 7/1
| kellie1999 chapter 8 . 6/30
Things are getting interesting.
| Kryshna chapter 7 . 6/2
I think my entire soul just squealed because of this story.
| fireycloud chapter 7 . 5/18
love the fic can't wait to see what they do to Tifa please update soon
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/16
I love this fic, and by the way the pants do exist my friend got it as a gag gift
| Ldrmas chapter 7 . 3/25
Awwww I can't wait to read more! I was looking for just a Cloud Seph story and I find this little gem it's been a while since I was into AxR and RxS too so yay and thank you!
| NyxAria chapter 7 . 2/21
Hey I love this fic, and I especially liked how you made sora and roxus twin brothers to cloud! Please continue writing and if you need any help is be happy to give some and please please please don't give up on this fic and if you have try it again and if you just can't finish it you could always let some else finish or help!