|Reviews for The White Devil of the Moon|
| Luna's Meow chapter 17 . 6/20
This... was a great read. I'm one to give criticism, but for this I have none. Excellent work blending the two worlds together.
| Victoria chapter 2 . 6/4
Great fic! 3
However, someone is sporking it. They think it isn't nearly as good as it is.
| Firedon chapter 2 . 6/6
I guess I will find out the reason for why you have Precia showing up at juuuust the moment when the two series meet here, but fuck this feels way too contrived. It just feels so unnecessary to involve her here.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/15
Ah, the usual Nanoha wank. How shocking.
| omnimon12 chapter 15 . 5/16
[While Alicia gasped at the further revelation of how far her mother had fallen in the years she had been comatose (insert comma here) the paramedics were (enraged/horrified?). While they didn't understand the bit about familiars, they had just heard the story of a woman who had condemned her child's primary caretaker to a lingering death for daring to suggest that the parent make a token effort to involve herself in her child's life.]
| Treant Balewood chapter 17 . 4/3
I really enjoyed this story, Thanks for Writing!
| Lordsunshine64 chapter 17 . 1/13
a very enjoyable story. thanks for writing it!
| Prince Chrom chapter 17 . 10/25/2016
Should be 7 and 9 for the Jewel seeds.
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/23/2016
Great story. Only downside in my opinion is that I'm mildly disappointed that with how much TSAB and the Senshi ended up dealing with the authorities, we never got to see a government perspective on a magical girl war being fought in their streets.
| Guardoflight chapter 17 . 7/17/2016
A very enjoyable story that had me hooked until the end and different to what I was expecting.
| Hikari Nova chapter 14 . 6/15/2016
lose of a major load bearing support can cause major damage in a very short amount of time depending on it's location, and how many Major load bearing supports the building has
| omnimon12 chapter 17 . 5/14/2016
Ok, so Hayate had the remaining EIGHT Jewel Seeds, and Beryl stole them from her, but she only fed SIX of them to Metallia? What happened to the other two?
| Unca Bob chapter 17 . 3/31/2016
I've enjoyed this story. My own knowledge of both Sailor Moon and MGLN is a bit limited and, in the case of Sailor Moon, faded by time. Still, the crossover seems well done with respect payed to both the settings and characters used.
| Shinoki chapter 17 . 3/21/2016
Whew. That was satisfying! Ahhh, you made me re-realize why I loved Fate so much. While Precia was a disgusting human for being such trash to Fate, I actually found the whole abusive mother to obedient loving child dynamic interesting to watch in the anime and continued here. As someone who has never watched Sailor Moon (the shock and blasphemy!) this was very enjoyable.
| Slices chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
Nanoha's injury happened a few years before strikers (at the time of strikers she was 18) so I guess your timeframe of acceptable.