Reviews for The price of loving her
iluvJasperHale chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Oh my. That was so powerful! It made my heart break reading it. Poor poor Dameon. This is absoloutley brilliant. 10/10 :)
Soulweaver chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Honestly that was beautiful, I really could feel his pain leap off the screen, you should keep at it!
Amberfire287 chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Absolutely brilliant. Really great.
I love the depth of emotion and feeling you've managed to communicate in this. It's all so Dameon.
The way you've written the visual ideas is a bit confusing, because it's almost as though he is seeing it (though we know he can't. Having said that, they really add something for the rest of us, who can visualise it!
Fantastic, I love it. Especially your description of what happens after he leaves the room.