Reviews for A Traitor Branded
satomika chapter 22 . 9/25

So sweet!

I hope there'd be a guy who would do anything for me as well.

Although i wish there's a sequel with kids and their life in Oto.
random716 chapter 12 . 7/22
I love how you painted the picture of Sakura's feelings. It's so accurate (from my point of view) . Her hate-her and can't-hate-her attitude towards Hinata is so realistic. I mean, Sasuke is her first love, eh? Can't shake that off completely.
random716 chapter 6 . 7/21
Sexual tension~!
random716 chapter 5 . 7/21
I am not particularly fond of NaruSaku but you did conveyed Sakura's feelings towards Sasuke, Naruto and Hinata very accurately. Annoyingly accurate of my NaruSaku theory: that she wanted somebody and Naruto is good enough so she could settle; with small feelings, but mainly driven because of fear to be left alone. Abg slow clap for yaoi innuendos and Sakura's bleeding nose.
random716 chapter 4 . 7/21
Damn, the sexual tension in this chapter is thick! I'm surprised Kiba didn't woke up though.
random716 chapter 3 . 7/21
I'm still in the middle of reading this chapter but damn, that's on point! SasuHina (and ItaHina) vital point is just that (I personally think)! Hinata and Itachi is so alike in so many ways!
crystalblue19 chapter 22 . 6/6
Aah, I just loved this story from beginning to end - I especially adore your Sasuke and how once he's found someone he wants to be with it'll only be that person until the end. And their relationship is so sweet. x3
anne chapter 22 . 4/3
i love this fic. every single thing about this fic - i love it!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/2
Ugh, stupid, self-absorbed Sakura. She unrelentlessly goes after Sasuke and doesn't respect his wishes when he turns her down (funny how, if the genders were the opposite, it would count as sexual harrassment). Then she constantly rejects and abuses Naruto, but expects him to always be there as a "reserve".
And then she has the stomach to be jealous of Hinata and goes straight after Naruto just to hurt her. What a bitch!
Hinatta chapter 14 . 3/15
I'll add this story to my Hinata Community
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4thkage chapter 11 . 2/16
I want to hv friends like Naruto...
he is dork...but he's a loyal friend...
suddenly...i miss Naruto so much...
4thkage chapter 5 . 2/16
at the beginning of the this chapter...
suddenly i felt hate with Sakura-chan..
she want Sasuke...and felt jealous with Hinata...
then...she also want Naruto...and felt jealous with Hinata bcoz Naruto want to ask her out...
i thought...what the...
paracuties chapter 22 . 2/8
Aw, sweet. Really, really sweet. I do wish you would go back and fix the grammatical and tense mistakes, though; they're distracting and sometimes a little confusing.

Otherwise, the story was really, really good. Written really well. You made their personalities and characters three-dimensional and illustrated their progress and changes very well. I enjoyed reading this.

Keep writing!
ChoppingBoard chapter 22 . 2/1
Very nicely written fic. I loved the development and this would've been a possible legitimate Sasuhina development had it happened in universe :D
anne chapter 22 . 12/23/2014
wow! that was good.

the lengths he would go through for hinata - well wow! it def makes a girl jelly!

well done! thank you for the read!
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