Reviews for Happy Potter Life
evan lucas chapter 30 . 12/2/2013
I didn't enjoy this chapter because it was the same for me and I officially don't want to finish this book now.. Hope you're happy
JWR Cromwell chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
great story
Guest chapter 32 . 10/11/2013
OMG. Thanks so much. :) I am going to play like it's Teddy's 13 birthday with my sister. :) Even though he is a fictional character
Elizabeth chapter 17 . 4/29/2013
this was an ok chapter and hope the next will be better
Harmony1995 chapter 32 . 4/18/2013
Amazing story, that's me read it twice now and it's still one of my favourites :)
MrsFHTx chapter 32 . 4/8/2013
I honestly can't say I enjoyed this fiction, though I read it all the way through. There were so many places in the (very) long story when I felt like I was reading an adolescent girl's first attempt at writing a story about how she thought life ought to be, with a dashing hero showing his love for his lady.

For me, the worst flaw in the story (aside from the many word usage problems, where words were simply used incorrectly) is that the writer occasionally seems to have forgotten that her characters have magic. This was especially true in the lengthy medical issues. Rowling made it clear that electricity and magic don't mix - yet this writer filled St. Mugno's with EKG machines, ventilators, and other devices. Rather than using potions, her medical characters use needles and pills. And, instead of using magic to communicate, the characters in this story all have cell phones.

The result was a train wreck of a story that needed significant edits to iron out the inconsistencies and faulty logic. I am sorry to be leaving the first negative review I have ever left, but since the writer seems to be young enough - and have enough basic ability - to have a future in the field, I'm hoping that honest comments will be helpful instead of hurtful.

The thing that would have made this story better is an internal consistency that followed the outlines set by the "parent" series. With a little editing and proofreading for grammar and word use, that consistency could have changed a train wreck into a delight.
Eternal Downfall chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
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Chrissie chapter 32 . 3/18/2013
Wow! This is AMAZING! You should try and get this published.
I LUV BUDDER chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
BUDDER!
firebolthallow1572 chapter 32 . 2/22/2013
I think you put Professor McGonagall in more with family because she close the family.
Guest chapter 32 . 1/9/2013
This is one of my favourite stories i've read it so many times because i love it so much, you did a great job thank you :D
H2O-A chapter 15 . 12/30/2012
I don't want to be mean but after a woman has her baby she does not just deflate she is still bey large so she has to work off her baby weight just throwing that thought out thee... love your story
Thebeanster171 chapter 32 . 12/15/2012
I read all the way through and am extremely happy with your ending. you are an amazing writer and I just want to say thank you sooo much for the lovely story. :D
Gabby chapter 32 . 11/10/2012
Hi, i loved this story and have read it from first to last word several times and really enjoy it, i was just wondering what James' middle name ended up being, because Lily's is Joanna, Emma's Harmony and Daniel's is Sirius, so yeah i just wondered what James' was
Soup-A-Star chapter 29 . 9/8/2012
I love the fluffy story but it's about time some drama happened!
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