Reviews for Tangled Up In Blue
Steph720 chapter 36 . 10/19
I loved this. It was a total page turner. I got an hour of sleep before work today because I couldn't put it down.

That being said I have so many unresolved questions. I hope it's not one where it's you imagine what the ending is. Isn't important she finds out she wasn't "Emma"? Why didn't he force her to hear him out. He just gave up after 3 years of a semi-relationship and finally deciding he wanted to break it off with Rose, with no contact for 3 more years because of a huge misunderstanding? And then instead of explaining all he says is I'm sorry and she's okay after years of thinking he played her and their whole relationship iis fake for research for his next book. She was unreasonable for not hearing him out 3 years ago and he's just as bad for giving up.

And I don't understand the conversation with Jasper where Jasper reminded him do you really want to do this, before publishing The Lion and the Lamb. Does that mean he wasn't writing her the opposite of how he saw her or not?. He thought it was so obvious to her. That just goes to show that Jasper knew her better than Edward and with her super low self-esteem she would believe the worst.

And I'm dying to know the future. How do they make it work? What's their future look like, and I was disappointed they didn't have a reunion lemon. I loved this so much, which makes the open ending so much harder for me as a reader to accept. Where's the deep resolution conversation about the past? How do they mesh their lives together?

I really, really hope you do an epilogue and/or a future take.

Thanks for a great story despite the unresolved nature I feel. You're an amazing writer.
Brinkleydeelite chapter 36 . 10/16
I really enjoyed this! Thank you
Brinkleydeelite chapter 24 . 10/16
What that was his chance to leave her! Then Rose goes and does that!
Guest chapter 36 . 10/14
Absolutely LOVED this.
4butterbeans chapter 36 . 9/29
This story is amazing. Please share more of your talent with us!
Guest chapter 36 . 9/26
But its not a happy ending though is it? Becausebtheyre still only gonna see each other once a year again
Guest chapter 28 . 9/26
She's an idiot and deservesceverythings that's happening to her. Cunt
Guest chapter 25 . 9/26
She's a cunt. All they had was sex and that's all they've evervwantedc
Guest chapter 12 . 9/25
B ellas a bitch
Guest chapter 2 . 9/25
He only wants her for sex like usual and why would she marry him if she doesn't want him.. I just dontnget it. OH WAIT I DO, ITS BECAUSE SHEBWANTS HIS DICK
Guest chapter 36 . 9/23
Honestly it was a terrible story about a whiny slut who wanted her husband to be the bad guy instead of leaving him before opening her legs for Edward who has a need for damsels in distress he did it with rose and he’s wanted to “save” Bella it’s honestly gross both your characters had no redeeming qualities they were just cheating assholes
Guest chapter 36 . 9/20
I loved this .. One of the best I've ever read . Well written
marymary123 chapter 36 . 9/14
Be proud a different story,well written and one i enjoyed
marymary123 chapter 19 . 9/14
When you go home get your dad and mom together tell them Jake is cheating with Leah and you are done. He can pay child support and wonder where his kids are since he abandoned Bella first
Marymary123 chapter 11 . 9/14
Jake ischeatingeither with a man or woman
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