What a thoughtful story. Beautifully written. Thank you

The last couple sentences of this chapter really hit home for me.

Great writing!

I was very late to this party but what a beautiful and heart wrenching ride
Bravo
R

The moment
She knew she'd
Waltzed with the prince
But now cleaned
The hearth
Of one who
Saw her no longer
As wife
But
Maid
R

:):)
Read in one sitting
Fabulous

Found this story on FB

Looking for yourself
He’s left behind
Chorus tiny hands
Hearts and minds
Looking for
Yourself
No one
Else can
Sticky hearts and minds
Find you divine
R

There's something seriously wrong here, you know? Jake...what is up with him?
Her breathing disturbs his sleep, really?
Either he's discovered he's gay, or he's in love with someone else.

Is this how this story will progress, I wonder? They will meet once a year at this workshop, while going through the motions the rest of the time?

Hmm, that got pretty serious at the end.

Pretty much as I'd imagined. By the way, Edward may be engaged to Rose, but he doesn't seem to be in love with her.

Kind of a first date...in a hot tub. ;)

I guess he heard her on the phone and knows she's not single? That lead to his bad mood.
He can't keep on ignoring her though.

Hmm, finding one's voice. That is tough to teach.
Bella's daughter is a hoot! :D
I've faced this issue at resorts, poor cell reception in the rooms. Why they can't provide decent internet to their guests is beyond me. (throws hands in air)

Wow, that was quite the first meeting!
Oh yes, Bella will definitely pay attention in this class. Well, if she doesn't gets lost in Edward's eyes. :)