Reviews for Naruto Fiction: Breathe for Me
ActuallyNevis chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Very nice! And I agree...Iruka would totally be the Dom! TOTALLY!
ZoSanFreakX chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
:O Iruka's not the Uke :O NOW THAT WAS VERY SEXY
yHime chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
wow... it was... hawt!luv it! thx for sharing! .
Ookamikuro chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
This is the first S&M I've seen for these two and even though I may not be a big fan of it this was damn interesting.
maethebellydancer chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
Super-fucking-hot-tastica! You know, I have befriended many Doms in my life, pros and recreational, (I'm in the burlesque business) and they have never really been able to relate to me in words what exactly goes on behind dungeon doors. You have a wonderfully sick talent for it my dear.
kira-chan's imagination chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
omg love it! you should have way more than 4 reviews. this story is amazing! youre a great writer 3
Zenerific1 chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
*panting* OMG! That was so scorchingly heated! Thanks!
FrOzEnDrAgOn chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Wow ! That has to be the hottest fic i've ever read! I'm usually a Kakashi seme fan but i loved Iruka being the Dom in this one, it was awesome! XD
VampireDoll666 chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
OH DAMN, I think I just died! *wipes away nose bleed* Sh*t that was the most smexiest BDSM I've read so far! *fans self*
SilkyOtter chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
Very nicely done, I hope you write more like it.