Reviews for Fate: Revisited
Leonineus chapter 5 . 1/14/2013
I'm... confused.

Still, too few Redemption of Althalus fics on this site so good show.
Darklight-phoenix chapter 5 . 3/6/2011
i love these stories, im guessing that the girl is emmy (also a goddess) and althalus...well is althalus...

update soon! love how it's going so far
slytherinsal chapter 5 . 3/3/2011
Certainly this piques the curiosity to want to know more [which is also the best way of controlling Althalus so i suppose those of us who love him share some of his weaknesses].

Technical suggestion; a/n for author's notes and putting the notes in italics would help to separate them from the main body of the text.

You indicated clearly which voice was speaking but there was a slightly less clear point in the middle where the older voice continues speaking but you have started a new paragraph for it; I don't know if that was intentional or the machine played silly so-and-so's [computers being like that]; but it did not read as smoothly as the rest.

I am enjoying this!
slytherinsal chapter 4 . 2/21/2011
this is starting to get interesting...

found the second chapter a little confusing; of course we are supposed to!

now wondering who SHE is...

nice pace.
Alyss Mainwaring chapter 2 . 5/5/2010
OMG There is another RoA on here!

Celebrate good time come on!

Mines the other one *looks around suspious* sush don't tell anyone.

If your wondering where my sence of humors from blame Rangers Apprentice : )

I started this place! : ) How god am I?

Alyss Mainwaring