Reviews for The Closet
Lakitalover chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
Aw. Poor Michael. This fic really makes me want to hug him. I like how you added a bit of humor about the magazine and sniper scope at the end to balance out the depressing memories. You have a knack for writing excellent one shots. This one, for example, contains a lot of emotion and vivid imagery, and it truly feels complete. Your endings are terrific. The last lines in your fics always sum them up nicely and hit just the right note be it happy or sad. Great work!
RascalFlattsS chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Aw...what a cute story! Good job!

forum user chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Great as always :)
Tilly11 chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
This was SO good! "Our house had been built on secrets and lies, not hugs and family time," is a sad but beautiful statement; can just hear Michael's voice. Nice job at the ending, between Mike and Fi- you captured them perfectly!
SaoirseConnelly chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
So sad! Poor Michael. I wish I could be more constructive, but it really broke my heart.
Briar Elwood chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
I appreciate anything with a good look into Michael's past at home. Very nice, loved the voice you gave Frank.
Groovy82 chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
Nice story I enjoyed it.