Reviews for The Bodies in the Beach
Kpreader16 chapter 18 . 4/21/2017
We have the same taste in music.
TimelordOrConsultingDetective chapter 18 . 9/16/2015
Your fan fictions are actually inspiring - I love the mature outlook you bring to every character and your authors notes inspire me to work harder and be better so thank you - I also really love your writing it is some of the best and you have all the characters written perfectly - you are the sort of writer I aim to be xxx
Pheonix1995 chapter 18 . 1/23/2013
Great Story! Loved it! :D
Lliaaame chapter 18 . 11/1/2012
I really liked this story! I found it a few days ago, then I read it all the way through. I really enjoyed the complexities of the story. Although, what you lacked was the bonesey stuff like the lab work, the funny interns, etc. and mostly the major Bones characters like Hodgins Angela Cam... I missed them! Overall it was excellent. :D
Maunzeli chapter 18 . 10/25/2012
I try to limit my reading to completed stories so I don't get left hanging. Thank you for writing this. The plot and character development were quite phenomenal, yet Booth and Bones remained quite true to the TV show until the last scene. I admit I am not a fan of the fantasy love life of Booth and Bones and prefer a good, strong plot. Yours was very good and very well developed. Thank you for writing this story. I really enjoyed reading it.
Oreata chapter 3 . 6/3/2012
This is good so far, I like the speed you are taking things at, the characterizations...etc. I also would like to be more educated about removing human flesh via maceration... does one know all this?
Nana25 chapter 18 . 4/27/2012
kt chapter 18 . 3/12/2012
fabulous story you are a gifted writer - wish you much success with your novel
marple chapter 18 . 10/7/2011
Soo happy to find this fic again, and you have finished. No worry about forgetting, it just makes an excuse to go back and refresh it. Love your writing. The mix of the characters and a really good case is so good. Thanks for sharing your story with us and good luck with your writing. Im sure it will be great.
Nattylovesjordy chapter 17 . 9/29/2011
I really wish there would be an epilogue to this, but I really liked the ending. Very poetic. Thank you, especially for finishing this even though there was such a long break in-between.
mendenbar chapter 18 . 9/29/2011
Just wanted to take a moment to say how much I enjoyed this fic. And the ending was particularly fine and well worth the waiting to get it. Thanks for not abandoning it!

Money isn't the root of all evil. It is the LOVE of money that is. IMO poverty isn't the inequity in the distribution of wealth, we all get what we work for (or our ancestors did - or stole, whatever). It is what we do with what we have. Are we generous or are we like Scrooge before the visitations? I have known both the very poor and the very rich in my time. Some of each are generous with what they have and some are penny pinching misers who wouldn't give a mouthful to a person starving in front of them. It is what is in our hearts that defines us. I find poverty of spirit to be the true root of all Evil.
channylover9753 chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
daisy07 chapter 18 . 9/29/2011
That was a great ending to a really good story, and was well worth the wait.

Best wishes with your novel. Thanks for all the great entertainment.
lrigD chapter 18 . 9/29/2011

You're (unfortunately) right, at least in my case, about not remembering the beginning chapters of this story; but I loved the final chapter (17). I did know straight away what this story was about again and believe me, that doesn't happen all the time ;-) I like the way you ended the story, by giving Lorene a human face behind the posh exterior. And Booth and Brennan in the sea together :)

I wanted to comment mostly on your Afterthoughts chapter, because I can really recognize myself in your story. Like you, I grew up poor and I've worked my way (with a little government funding; but I live in the Netherlands, so it's a little different here) into university, and I'm meeting a lot of new people with all different background stories. It's very interesting, but sometimes I do feel a little out of place for not having had all the experiences they've had (e.g. going somewhere far away during the holidays, having a maid, stuff like that). Anyway, I just wanted to say that you should really be proud of getting there yourself. Personally, I believe that working for your own future, getting yourself out of the gutter to put it a little bluntly, gives your actions and what you're doing now an extra dimension. Not necessarily that you appreciate life more, because that really doesn't have to be true... but maybe a little self-esteem. Be proud of yourself!

Alright, sorry for that moralistic story, but that's just what I wanted to say.
MadeOfStars chapter 17 . 9/28/2011
Oh, this was truly lovely, the whole story through to thie perfect ending. Not too much, not too little, just right. Excellent work (however long it took to get there). And now I have to see if I can find Florahome Fl... I've never heard of it, but perhaps that was the point. :)
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