Reviews for The Bodies in the Beach
RK chapter 9 . 8/22/2010
Hi Elisabeth, i was so glad to see an update to this fanfic..i really like B&B UC stories esp married and you have built the right amount of suspense on the case. PPS
Aching Bones chapter 9 . 8/22/2010
Hi there,

Just caught up on this one...Really enjoying so far...All the emotions that were brought up for Booth...And he genuinely meant it when he told John that he would not judge his kids because of their mother...

Really looking forward to more...

irishleesh93 chapter 9 . 8/22/2010
Nice chapter.

Guys going out for drinks and playing pool that is a great way for gaining information. Smart move.
boneslver chapter 9 . 8/22/2010
soo glad for an update! i love this story!

i cant remember, what was the significance of the last time brennan saw booth play pool?
mendenbar chapter 9 . 8/22/2010
Sad to say that the theory that good parents make good kids and bad parents make bad kids is just a bunch of hokum. There are good kids from bad parents and bad kids from good parents, too. As Booth says, the kids make their own choice as do their parents.
Perfect Pirate Captain chapter 9 . 8/22/2010
Great chapter! That's very understandable that he'd come over and defend his kids, nice transition into Booth having the guys out for a social night as a way of finding out a motive. Update soon!
hot4booth chapter 9 . 8/22/2010
Great update. It has a great plot and character development beyond B&B.
LondonLi chapter 9 . 8/22/2010
Hey, I'm glad to see an update on this story. I believe that one of the best and worst things about their relationship is their ability to keep the status quo. Thanks for including that in this chapter. Good luck with your new classes.
RK chapter 8 . 8/10/2010
i was hoping for a new chappie. I really enjoying UC fanfics. PPS
RK chapter 8 . 8/8/2010
i was hoping for an update..i really like UC fanfics. PPS
Kent Rigel chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Okay, so the fact that you actually know what the 3rd ammendment is may have been the most dorkishly awesome part of this chapter... I'm Australian but I've read the US constitution and am surprised by how few Americans seem to know it despitely being inordinately proud of it.

As always though you've created the foundations of a wonderfully detailed framework for your story to take place in, rather than hoping straight into the main thrust or over focusing on the characters - a flaw that many writers seem to make in their eagerness.

If you'll excuse me I have more chapters to read... right now.
obsessedbonesfan chapter 8 . 7/22/2010
This story is awesome and completely in character! It has been so long since I could find a story that was so well-written with the type of plot I was looking for, and this nails it! Can't wait for the next update!
Different Child chapter 8 . 7/18/2010
I really love BB undercover stories! Especially where they have to put themselves in a situation for an extended period of time! Hehe. Ah, Bones! 33 I can't wait for the new season! I can't wait for you to continue this either! So nice to find one that's recently posted and updated! I need to do the updating thing... It's nice to read your work again!

~ DC
Chicklit chapter 8 . 7/17/2010
LOL! This has to be one of my favorite exchanges between Booth and Brennan. She's so sweetly obtuse and Booth's, well, Boothy. More, please!
TemperTemper chapter 8 . 7/17/2010
Oh I loved this - you are an expert at creating these multi-layered stages for your multi-chaps.

I adored this glimpse into Booth's psyche too.

Absolute favourite part:

*The way one could feel a storm rise over the curve of the earth, encroaching on the coastline, oncoming and dark as the water over which it traveled, she could feel him. His presence, like that of the ocean, was inescapable.*

Just gorgeous.
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