Reviews for Fictionista Wrkshp May to July 2010 Prompts
Siriusmunchkin chapter 73 . 3/26/2011
Edward and Emmett are doing well with the construction company and loving every minute I'd say. And Emmett wants to meet Bella and Bella's friends. Think Emmett is liking Rose a lot already. And looks like Edward's other friends are liking Bella. Hands off guys. Bella is taken. And she most certainly likes that idea.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 72 . 3/26/2011
The trip is producing very good things. Bella is realizing what she wants to do with her life. New experiences can make you see things you may not have thought about. And Edward is saying that he wants to make a try at making this work on a permanent basis. Life will be different when they return to the Mainland. They are betting that they will still be very much together.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 71 . 3/26/2011
The alone on the open ocean is at an end. Have they put their trust in the right person? Edward trusts Aaron, therefore Bella is willing to trust him. But what will the immediate future bring?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 70 . 3/26/2011
The relationship seems to be working. The difference in their ages isn't a problem for either of them. Edward's mother doesn't seem to have a problem with Bella. Maybe a little surprised. Edward does introduce her as his girlfriend. Kate might be a little surprised but hides it well. And Edward is showing Bella the house he's planning to build for himself. And maybe for the family he wants?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 69 . 3/26/2011
Young love enjoying it's beginning. Romantic beach setting in one of the most romantic places on earth. They're enjoying each other. Both wondering what will happen when they get home. Will the time they've spent in Hawaii be the inspiration Bella needs to decide on a direction for her life? Will that life include Edward?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 68 . 3/26/2011
Living on a sail boat for any length of time and having only one experienced sailor at the outset would be more than a little tough. But Bella is a lot tougher than she gives herself credit for. She had to be to testify in the first place. And she's proving it now to herself and to Edward. Her father would be proud of her. Just hoping they survive so they can hear how proud their loved ones are of them. Hopefully Mr Welsh is as trustworthy as Edward believes.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 67 . 3/26/2011
Air conditioning is not one of my favorite things. Though with Edward to warm me up I could live with it. Sounds like Bella is having a great time. She's putting it on the line that she really wants him. He's saying yes he wants the same thing. We know that good things don't always last. Sometimes there are big bumps before the road smooths out again. Sometimes there are just dead ends.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 66 . 3/26/2011
Just hope she remembered suntan lotion with a high SPF count. The water in Hawaii is really warm. And the beaches are great. I'm jealous of Bella right now. She had a good time listening to Jacob tell stories. Edward looked a little jealous. He made sure to stake claim to his territory as soon as he could. She is totally into the romance of the islands.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 65 . 3/26/2011
Bella is used to guys taking the lead. She's 19 and used to guys her age. Edward is 29 and used to women who know what they want. He's building up a friendship first. Bella isn't sure what's going on. She does take the lead like he suggests and it does produce results. So where do we go from here?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 64 . 3/26/2011
Hearing the door slam on a boat in the middle of the ocean would be very scary. The bad guys could have seen where you were going and followed and now you have no place to run. Let's just hope Edward's old boss is on the up and up. It would be very, very bad if they were walking into a trap.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 63 . 3/26/2011
Books are always appropriate. Sounds like a fun first night in Hawaii. Sounds like Edward is doing some serious thinking about his new relationship with Bella. She's different and he likes that. She's not the groupie type. Maybe she could be the one he's looking for. She's hoping for that at the moment. And he isn't acting like the other girl's say he usually does.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 62 . 3/26/2011
Flying now would make me a lot more than anxious. Hawaii is a very beautiful and fun place. Haven't been to Maui though. I'm thinking Bella is going to have a lot of fun there. Maybe she and Edward can have a beach wedding. A family member did that last year.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 61 . 3/26/2011
The other girls are just jealous. Edward's right. You can believe them or believe him. Hawaii will be a lot of fun. Bella will probably have a chance to do some exploring on her own while Edward attends the conference.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 60 . 3/26/2011
Girl talk can be very fun. Especially when you're all close. And talking about Edward would be fun anyway. He certainly seems to be very interested in Bella. And more than willing to have her keep him company even if it's to sleep. Having fun with this so far.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 59 . 3/26/2011
Edward was in time to rescue her. Now there is no going back. The bad guys know Edward is on to them. And they will stop at nothing to stop Bella. This would be a good time for her to tell Edward what she hasn't told anybody else about what she knows.
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