Reviews for Fictionista Wrkshp May to July 2010 Prompts
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 8 . 5/15/2010
She seems to be settling in a bit and I like that..It's great that she likes the job with Jas and Rose..And also, the pace she and Edward are taking is good..

Thanks for it...
amymorgan chapter 10 . 5/15/2010
Good, honest, raw. And she sounds so ready for a job. Thank you.
amymorgan chapter 9 . 5/15/2010
Short but sweet. Thanks.
amymorgan chapter 6 . 5/15/2010
Aha, Lauren bites the dust. Nice little story you have going. I'm hooked. Is it train, as in "Stop this Train"?
amymorgan chapter 5 . 5/15/2010
Whew. Now I'm really confused: they were together a while back...and he's casually seeing Lauren. He let Bella live with him after SHE screwed up. I'm plowing on...
amymorgan chapter 4 . 5/15/2010
Fascinating. Bella had a pill problem?
amymorgan chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
I wonder what she saw in the mirror. A hook on your story, as always.
manda2784 chapter 8 . 5/15/2010
Great update. I'm really enjoying this storyline.
whohellanoes chapter 10 . 5/15/2010
YAY! love declarations. it doesn't get any better than that. eh, i didn't know they could be so silly together. the tickle attack was a nice little break from their usual 'stuff', as Edward says. thank you so very much. you are such a pro :)
manda2784 chapter 10 . 5/14/2010
Very sweet chapter. I love the playful side of Edward and Bella with the tickling, and I love the serious side too with the I love yous.
2loveybunnies chapter 10 . 5/14/2010
Aww! Just, aww! So sweet this chapter was! Sorry, having a Yoda moment apparently. He loves her! He wants her to be healthy and he doesn't want to hurt her... I thought for sure he was just protecting himself. What an incredible guy. Bella is lucky he took her in after everything that happened before. I'm hoping this means there is light at the end of the tunnel now that Bella clean, going to therapy and most likely getting a job. I want them both to be happy.

Glad you're feeling better!
Crispy Anakin chapter 10 . 5/14/2010
swooon. i like the little steps that they're taking.
CullenObsession114 chapter 10 . 5/14/2010
:)))) lovedd it!
MadamThang chapter 10 . 5/14/2010
So sweet and delicious. Easy sounds like something I could use too.

Thank you!

XxOo,

AO
MadamThang chapter 9 . 5/14/2010
Ahhhh - I love it. I love being left with the feeling of good things to come.

Hope you feel better!

XO,

AO
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