|Reviews for Fictionista Wrkshp May to July 2010 Prompts|
| archy12 chapter 46 . 12/14/2012
two police officers involved?that's bad!
| archy12 chapter 45 . 12/14/2012
Edward had some confidence,or maybe he just believed in fate...anyway,they are together now.:)
| archy12 chapter 44 . 12/13/2012
very interesting use of the prompt 'canal'! :)
| archy12 chapter 42 . 12/13/2012
yes,that would be difficult to explain.
| archy12 chapter 40 . 12/13/2012
ouch,i was hoping it wouldn't come to a fight,but i understand Edward's who knows,maybe James wouldn't have stopped otherwise,chasing Bella or demeaning her.
| archy12 chapter 39 . 12/13/2012
i don't know whether to read the next chapter or find the next one for this story...and it's late too.i should sleep.
| archy12 chapter 37 . 12/13/2012
now that was an 'aww' moment!:)
| archy12 chapter 35 . 12/13/2012
yes,i too thought about that-meeting with James.
as for mistakes,there aren't many.a few chapters back i read a sentence-'He pulled the chin on the lamp...' that should be chain,right?
| archy12 chapter 34 . 12/13/2012
i was going to make a silly towel joke but these two got so serious...now i am curious to see what Edward has bring out that statement,i mean.
| archy12 chapter 33 . 12/13/2012
Bella has my sympathy!i know a couple of people who get really bad PMS like water-retention and cramps and mood-swings,so i consider myself fortunate in that respect.
very,very nice of Edward to bring all that stuff for Bella,and then hanging out with her!most boys,even men,run away at the first m-word.
| archy12 chapter 30 . 12/13/2012
wow,that was a serious ,i am amazed at has been so good to Bella,helping and supporting her in all the ,amazing.
| archy12 chapter 29 . 12/13/2012
yes,it's definitely a tricky the trial is already over and James sentenced,so maybe after a while the agency won't mind?i have no idea how these things work,of course...
| archy12 chapter 28 . 12/13/2012
yeah,there are no rules against kissing while you are waiting to 'know each-other'!:)
| archy12 chapter 26 . 12/13/2012
yeah,this one too i've read as an independent how i read all the independent ones but never or around to these little gems!oh well,better late than never.:)
have you ever considered re-writing 'Train'?it has a lot of potential as a multi-chapter fic,not too long but with more details than here.
| archy12 chapter 25 . 12/13/2012
can't blame Alice for being protective of her brother,even though it's none of her business what Edward does and who he ,at least Bella and Edward are closer,and understand the situation.