Reviews for Heat
Hell Kaiserin chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
That was interesting. Really fun to read. You got them in character and ah It was nice. I really live this pairing and this was very well written. Good job! I loved it.
silverbutterfly13 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Hmmm... Very smutty, and I actually liked how you portrayed Near as a female. The question is, will she get knocked up? ;p Love the story
HeyJudeIwannaHoldYourHand chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I really don't like fem-near but this was tooooo cute and hot;)
uhuhuhuhuhuhu chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
cute :3
My Scolipede Gal chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Nice ending...
ivy2772 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
love it!so.. completely..hot!
fangirlingprobs chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
fuck

this is fucking amazing
your writing is amazing

any chance of expanding on this au?!
cltaylor chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Wow! You did an amazing job writing the genderswap. Excellently written. Perfectly executed. So glad this story was recommended to me. Hope you'll write another!
KeehlMichael chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
This's a very hot story indeed. *_* I liked it! Can I translate it into Russian, please? (if there is something wrong in my actions,please,tell me,I'm only a beginner huh)
notactiveanymoreby3 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Woah, that was so amazing!(:

I love your choice of words. :D

And in all, that was really, really cute. [:

Yours,

iMightBeYourDad
Littleluck chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
That made me smile so badly! Very well written with an adorable ending! I loved how Near teased Mello so much! Great Job!
ShyClown chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
I loves it the little game their playing so cute how it matters not to either of them who wins lol and how you write their POV lovely
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
I am a nineteen year old girl, not unused to the occasional sexual encounter, and yet the whole time I was reading this I had a deep blush on my face and I was wrapped into a tight little ball on my living room floor, wishing I had a cigarette.

You succeeded in nailing Mellos and Nears personality perfectly.

PS I love the happy ending. Glad it wasn't a sex-only story.

I, er, I liked it. It wasn't my usual genre, but it was in character and well-written, not solely perverse. Good job...

o/o
NothingsXSorrow chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
This is one of the hottest genderswaps I have ever read! Very delicious. I love the teasing aspects.

I hope that you explore this pairing sometime again, I would love to read it.
wizzy chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
wahahahaha. nice one

fem near X mello rocks

but this story makes them more hot lol
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