|Reviews for Promises|
| ADDAMSFAMILYTREE chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
Looking odd. Why not have a "BARNEY MILLER"/ "JAKE & THE FATMAN" crossover in which the next of kin of the late NYPD Detective Nick Yemana ask Jake and Derek to find his killer or killers, and in doing so they lock horns with NYPD retirees Phil Fish and Frank Luger together with the entire 12TH Precinct Squad Room Detective lineup.
| Yankee01754 chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
I can tell English is not your first language but I got the gist of the story and you've got the relationship between the characters down quite well.
Jake is a stubborn soul but so isn't JL. Watching them do battle is always fun! And poor Derek is always caught in the middle!
The banter (joking) was quite believeable.
Hope to see more. (And I"m glad I'm not the only one writing Jake and the Fatman fanfic now.)