Reviews for While he Dreams
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
This story was a good read. I wonder, as another reader/reviewer wrote, that Sam may wonder where Frodo is and try to catch up to him. Still, you did good keeping Frodo in-character. Seems Frodo can't go on without his friend Sam.

Good work.

Aria Breuer
ConstablePenhaleShootsHimself chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
A great story. Very well written.
bishwop chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
This is beautifully sad. You've managed to capture the way Frodo feels for Sam very well in such a short fic.
Flame Tigress chapter 1 . 3/18/2002
So sad... *sniff* Beautifully written.
Nimroth Whitebough chapter 1 . 3/9/2002
oh this is so sweet! even though it is short it is very good! hooray you! Nim.
Haunting Shinigami chapter 1 . 2/28/2002
Yay! It's good I like ...cute!
Strenua chapter 1 . 2/27/2002
this is a great story and you should continue it! Sam comes after him of course :) something anyway. You are a great writer I see and I will read some of your other stuff in a moment, if you have any other *hoping*

Van Donovan chapter 1 . 2/27/2002
Please break my heart and write a sequel to this depicting Sam waking up and realizing Frodo has indeed left for good: his walking stick is gone, his pipe, his sack, plenty of food beside, along with a fair amount of missing wardrobe and his heavy cloak.

I want to see Sam's desolatation, his pain at being abandoned without so much as a goodbye or explaination. Yes. That would be quite lovely.

Although I did like this. It was very nice. It seems to be begging for more though. I went to click the "chapter 2" button and . . . alas there was none.
Joyful chapter 1 . 2/26/2002
*wipes away tears* *Sniffles* So sweet & so sad! ! ! ! Awwwwwwe!
Melilot chapter 1 . 2/25/2002
That was so sad and the quote was perfect. I have read it a few times a every time i cry because it makes me think of what i would feel it i had to leave my best friend. That is so good. Will you write anymore LOTR fanfic?
Jewel of the Twilight chapter 1 . 2/23/2002
Oh. That is so sweet.
YouKnowWhoIAm chapter 1 . 2/11/2002
Not bad at all. Do you do longer ones or is this just the first chapter of more to come? I would be interested to see more. Nice name by the way.
sarah chapter 1 . 2/11/2002
Hey! Love this fic! (tear!) :)
minaminamina chapter 1 . 2/11/2002
Aw! It's very good, except unless you want to insinuate a *relationship* between Frodo and Sam, you should probably change the "i want to lay my head on his chest" thing. ALthough, maybe you should keep it in there. I DON'T KNOW! Good fic, keep writing!
Mainecoon chapter 1 . 2/10/2002
Awwwww! So sad! I liked it.
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