this was a great look into Riza’s life! I liked how you portrayed her relationship with her father, it feels like it just fits into her character perfectly.

This was so grounded in the realities of the characterizations you nailed perfectly, it was absolutely incredible to read. So, so many great moments and lines. Excellent.

I hereby label this fic... CANON! Thanks for filling up the blanks rather beautifully! I'd have to say, I love your writing style, how you kept their characters authentic, and the plot itself. It would be more than a pleasure to read more fics of this kind! God bless, and thank you!

Oh wow! It's one of the best stories I've read

slow clap.

Hi, yes I am dead. Dead in the I cried so much dead.
I am deaaaad.
My babies I would like to assume that they found their way back toe ach other, since the ending was open and what with the manga, buuuuut this still hurts.
Damnit. Damn it! My otp deserves happiness gosh darn it!
But I enjoyed this so much! Thank u for writing it! Young royai always gets me for some reason...

Beautiful. Riza's characterization here could very well be canon.

Amazing. Riza is such an interesting character.

Really IC to me, and your writing style gives a special atmosphere to the fic. Thank you for this moment.

i was surprised that this was a one-shot! very plausible backstory for roy & riza, though i think she would never ever sleep with anyone else but roy. i don't think its an option because that big tattoo is just...and it seems she is an introvert meaning she keeps to herself a lot. wikia says she, "almost never seen 'dropping formalities,' even with those who are most intimate to her." so i doubt she'd ever risk letting anyone know about her mark.

really nice fic.

Fantastic

I'm dying because of all the feels ;-; Thank you xx

One of the best, most real, most raw Riza-centric piece in the fandom. Her silences speak more than anything, the way she stares and acts is the real her. Breathtaking style as well. Thank You!

Ummmmm wow. This was an absolute joy to read, thank you thank you thank you for sharing it with the world :)

This is now canon for me