Reviews for Take Aim
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6
SUPER well characterized. REALLY WELL OMG
Stardiouses chapter 1 . 2/7
This was perfect from the beginning to the end! I loved it.
ellce chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Amazingly written, a totally believable backstory for riza. I like how you included facts from the manga/anime. The only thing that might of been unbelieavable was the part where Roy and Riza slept together. But it wouldn't of been a royai if u hadn't. I wish u would of made it longer and included her at ishbal or training with the guns. But it was truly well written.
Milchzahn chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
Wonderful, blissfully wonderful, really
I read through it and haven't found a story so accurate and meaningful like this one in a very long time. Furthermore, I adore the way you write, its amazing! You should really be proud of that.
Simply, and I can't say it any better: Your story is breathtakingly perfect, and I mean it!
Love, Zähnchen
xXxConimaxXx chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
That was actually very well executed and very beautiful. I love your writing style too.
ShatteredGreen chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
Such a beautiful story...
ixr chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
This is be far one of the best royai fics I've encountered. It's amazing how well you managed to flesh out Riza's past history with her father, as well as Roy, while keeping your writing clean and minimalistic. There is so much subtext in the words Riza thinks, and says, and you pull it off marvelously. Your characterizations seem perfectly on point, and I think Riza's motivations and emotions, closely guarded as they are, come off as powerful as they are in the series. Amazing job.
spontaneous-thoughts chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
I had to stop reading like three times because my heart could not take how perfect this was. :):
Skwrl chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
Hnngh, what a great fic! The characterization is spot-on and you've filled me with Royai feels 3
Thank you for writing and sharing!
DeadFlash27 chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
really good love royai
Elite-chan chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
this is so beautiful and so sad at the same time
i hate it but i love it more o m g
Woodrokiro chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Such a lovely piece of work and wow can this pairing ever stop hurting my heart
SheWhoLeavesCrappyReviews chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
This was a wonderful read. I could imagine the scenes happening in my head so clearly and somehow and as cheesy as it sounds, it's like I felt their emotions too.
Seabit chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
Oh wow. Wow, wow, wow, WHOA.
asdfghjkl I'm speechless, very good work!
kiuna'yukina chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Oh man, this is beautiful. Brought tears to my eyes. Answers a lot of questions about their backstory, and even though its been done a thousand times before, there's just something in your writing that makes it seem new again.
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